5/7/5 farmlands first snow
poetry11 total reviews
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Your poem depicts a very pretty picture of the farmlands. Your choice of artwork is fitting. I thoroughly enjoyed your haiku. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Your poem depicts a very pretty picture of the farmlands. Your choice of artwork is fitting. I thoroughly enjoyed your haiku. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the lovely review
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Your welcome.
Comment from RYME4U
Well done! You set a scene of the first snowfall and its effects on the dry earth in a very descriptive way, Great imagery and choice of artwork. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Well done! You set a scene of the first snowfall and its effects on the dry earth in a very descriptive way, Great imagery and choice of artwork. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the lovely review!
Comment from ellie6
A poem full of hope. The illustration validates the theme of the piece. One can imagine the barren and thirsty fields drinking up the first snow. well written.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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A poem full of hope. The illustration validates the theme of the piece. One can imagine the barren and thirsty fields drinking up the first snow. well written.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for such a positive review
Comment from angel123
Your poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and it held my attention. Good alliteration of words farmlands first.
Angel123
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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Your poem is well written and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and it held my attention. Good alliteration of words farmlands first.
Angel123
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it and reviewed my little poem
Comment from lancellot
The ode to poetry written in the tradition Asian form, just like a Haiku seems to work for this theme. Yours is spot on and a good entry.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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The ode to poetry written in the tradition Asian form, just like a Haiku seems to work for this theme. Yours is spot on and a good entry.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2015
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thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. I like how you are using snow as a means to end a drought - don't usually think of it that way. Wonderful last line - very creative. Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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I thought this was very creative. I like how you are using snow as a means to end a drought - don't usually think of it that way. Wonderful last line - very creative. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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thank you
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
5/7/5 farmlands first snow
Interesting 5/7/5 poem. You did a good job with the syllable count and keeping with the theme of winter.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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5/7/5 farmlands first snow
Interesting 5/7/5 poem. You did a good job with the syllable count and keeping with the theme of winter.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice picture to go with your poem.
-I appreciate your author notes.
-Your format and presentation is very good.
-Lines one and two connect very well with line one introducing the subject of farmland in winter.
-Line two is quite effective with very vivid word choice, like ''cracked". The reader can picture these 'barren wheat fields' so parched from being dry.
-The last line is very good with the use of 'crystals' that emphasizes the cracked and barren fields, but this time there is hope.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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-A very nice picture to go with your poem.
-I appreciate your author notes.
-Your format and presentation is very good.
-Lines one and two connect very well with line one introducing the subject of farmland in winter.
-Line two is quite effective with very vivid word choice, like ''cracked". The reader can picture these 'barren wheat fields' so parched from being dry.
-The last line is very good with the use of 'crystals' that emphasizes the cracked and barren fields, but this time there is hope.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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Thank you for the very through review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from w.j.debi
I love the picture you paint with your words. The wheat field is so relieved to receive the moisture. Excellent closing line
white crystals of hope.
It puts a joyful note to the first snow.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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I love the picture you paint with your words. The wheat field is so relieved to receive the moisture. Excellent closing line
white crystals of hope.
It puts a joyful note to the first snow.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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thank you
Comment from Lynn27
This is great poem! I like how your words captured the moment of winter. That took me there when I read this piece. The photo and the colors were a great choice.
Nice job!
Lynn
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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This is great poem! I like how your words captured the moment of winter. That took me there when I read this piece. The photo and the colors were a great choice.
Nice job!
Lynn
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Comment Written 22-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2015
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thank you,Lynn