Acrostic (Behind the Door)
choosing the right door23 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Sounds very much like a poem prayer. Has an excellent rhythm, and the message is loud and clear. Seek and you shall find. Well done. Les
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Sounds very much like a poem prayer. Has an excellent rhythm, and the message is loud and clear. Seek and you shall find. Well done. Les
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. Blessings...........................Portia
Comment from honeytree
Really loved the art work so much for these words written
How true these words are for this poem
Yes God loves us all and will welcome
us all with open arms when we die.
particularly when we have lived a good
life helping others and doing God's work.
I have no six
Annie
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Really loved the art work so much for these words written
How true these words are for this poem
Yes God loves us all and will welcome
us all with open arms when we die.
particularly when we have lived a good
life helping others and doing God's work.
I have no six
Annie
Comment Written 02-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Honeytree,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..................Portia
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Loved what you wrote
Annie
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi Pharp..Interesting and captivating your acrostic is. The flow sounds like the musical hymn of heaven of which I have no idea what it sounds like because I was conditioned to know that it sounds beautiful, but then again, what is beauty? Your poem is beautiful because it serves to further condition us not to look past the evil door where evil speaks. What does the evil door look like? What does it say that is evil? Respectfully, I want to be shown, not explained to; the reason why your beautiful poem is short of the six star. Cheers.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Hi Pharp..Interesting and captivating your acrostic is. The flow sounds like the musical hymn of heaven of which I have no idea what it sounds like because I was conditioned to know that it sounds beautiful, but then again, what is beauty? Your poem is beautiful because it serves to further condition us not to look past the evil door where evil speaks. What does the evil door look like? What does it say that is evil? Respectfully, I want to be shown, not explained to; the reason why your beautiful poem is short of the six star. Cheers.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Good Morning Benjamin,
I always appreciate your most insightful reviews. I am so glad you think my poem is beautiful and I so much appreciate the five star rating.. I must strive to create a poem worthy of a six star rating just for you. Thanks so much for your support. ................Blessings.............Portia
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Pharp: Wow! Great witness! Love the photo and colors! The door of salvation and praising GOD! Super rhymes. We are in the end days with last chance. No blue light special but only one way through JESUS. All are invited to come and celebrate who only believe in JESUS! We are to go out of the steeple to reach the people. I'm sure that the angels are celebrating already for the lost to be found!
God bless! ><> soli deo Gloria! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Pharp: Wow! Great witness! Love the photo and colors! The door of salvation and praising GOD! Super rhymes. We are in the end days with last chance. No blue light special but only one way through JESUS. All are invited to come and celebrate who only believe in JESUS! We are to go out of the steeple to reach the people. I'm sure that the angels are celebrating already for the lost to be found!
God bless! ><> soli deo Gloria! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much my friend for your review, the very kind comments, your Joy in the Lord and for being a witness in these last and evil days. Thanks for the six star, but as you already know God gets all the Glory and Honor! Blessings......Portia
Comment from Chellybelle
This is such a creative way to use the writing prompt. I love how you used terms that are very relevant to Heaven and God, it made it that more real. Hope you did well in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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This is such a creative way to use the writing prompt. I love how you used terms that are very relevant to Heaven and God, it made it that more real. Hope you did well in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. I didn't win the contest but did win with God; a seed has been planted. Blessings..........................zportia
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi ...
Excellent application of the writing prompt. Some excellent advice, as well! I like aabb and abab rhyming in the poems I read. I am a poet of little to no consequence, but I enjoy the writings of those who beautify the genre. Excellent poem. Enjoyed it!
Best to you ...
Alan
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hi ...
Excellent application of the writing prompt. Some excellent advice, as well! I like aabb and abab rhyming in the poems I read. I am a poet of little to no consequence, but I enjoy the writings of those who beautify the genre. Excellent poem. Enjoyed it!
Best to you ...
Alan
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hello ProSongwriter,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..............................
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My Pleasure!
Comment from Emily George
Because I'm nosey I just had to take a peak behind the door and it was very inspirational. From the celestial picture which I loved, to the invitation for all the "pure in heart to see God's face'' I loved the wrap up with that great last line.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Because I'm nosey I just had to take a peak behind the door and it was very inspirational. From the celestial picture which I loved, to the invitation for all the "pure in heart to see God's face'' I loved the wrap up with that great last line.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thanks so much my friend for such a stunning review. Blessings.............................
Comment from samsaysagain
Excellent - done in striking colors this acrostic stands on its own merit. Lines were well rhymed and grow in meaning as it progresses to the second verse. To me the closing verse is the most powerful, cautioning those who waste no time w
will see God's face. Thanks for reminding us to not waste the time we have been given.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Excellent - done in striking colors this acrostic stands on its own merit. Lines were well rhymed and grow in meaning as it progresses to the second verse. To me the closing verse is the most powerful, cautioning those who waste no time w
will see God's face. Thanks for reminding us to not waste the time we have been given.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings........................
Comment from mbagby23
I too want to see his face. I am loving this poem. This would be good for children and young adults. Reading this can help them out in life. Sometimes we may want to open that dark door. Not knowing what will come or happen. Yet, when we pick the door to Christ we know where it will take us.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I too want to see his face. I am loving this poem. This would be good for children and young adults. Reading this can help them out in life. Sometimes we may want to open that dark door. Not knowing what will come or happen. Yet, when we pick the door to Christ we know where it will take us.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings.....................
Comment from Writeronboard
This is a well written poem that carries a big message with an amazing piece of artwork. Your description of what's behind the doors give a clear picture of which to take. Good job!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This is a well written poem that carries a big message with an amazing piece of artwork. Your description of what's behind the doors give a clear picture of which to take. Good job!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings........................