The Lonely God
Who is he?12 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
The first verse was all I needed. I mean who hasn't heard of Doctor Who. I must admit to not liking him though. I like the picture and the rhyme. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
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The first verse was all I needed. I mean who hasn't heard of Doctor Who. I must admit to not liking him though. I like the picture and the rhyme. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello mystery writer,
I didn't know who you were talking about first, I thought you meant God. Thank you for the author notes, without them this poem is hard to understand.
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Hello mystery writer,
I didn't know who you were talking about first, I thought you meant God. Thank you for the author notes, without them this poem is hard to understand.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello mystery poet,
There is a wonderfully surreal feel to your poem.
I like the question between stanzas. Gives your reader a moment to pause and take stock. I have to confess that my forehead got more furrowed as the read progressed - trying to figure out the meaning. I suppose this poem is open to several interpretations?
Author notes ... so this is about Dr. Who? Well written. Maybe I'm just a confused creature ... :)
Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
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Hello mystery poet,
There is a wonderfully surreal feel to your poem.
I like the question between stanzas. Gives your reader a moment to pause and take stock. I have to confess that my forehead got more furrowed as the read progressed - trying to figure out the meaning. I suppose this poem is open to several interpretations?
Author notes ... so this is about Dr. Who? Well written. Maybe I'm just a confused creature ... :)
Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning poet
I applaud your poetic talent
this entry before us is very much poetry
and yes
poetry in the truest sense
I see attention to detail with the word creations
truly
in short
all is very well executed in
words theme format and presentation
thank you for sharing your talent
this entry was an honor to read
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
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good morning poet
I applaud your poetic talent
this entry before us is very much poetry
and yes
poetry in the truest sense
I see attention to detail with the word creations
truly
in short
all is very well executed in
words theme format and presentation
thank you for sharing your talent
this entry was an honor to read
best of luck with the contest
ann marie
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a terrific send up for the seemingly eternal Doctor Who. I t reminds me of when I first watched the show, out of boredom, on PBS, while I was out of work and watching my two-year-old. The weird creatures all imagined and portrayed so well on a regular stage. Amazing story ideas. The changing of actors was what really caught my imagination. Your poem, written in the AABB format includes as much as anyone could throw in without turning to specific episodes. You seem to have hit a nerve I didn't know I had concerning The Doctor. Nice job.
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This is a terrific send up for the seemingly eternal Doctor Who. I t reminds me of when I first watched the show, out of boredom, on PBS, while I was out of work and watching my two-year-old. The weird creatures all imagined and portrayed so well on a regular stage. Amazing story ideas. The changing of actors was what really caught my imagination. Your poem, written in the AABB format includes as much as anyone could throw in without turning to specific episodes. You seem to have hit a nerve I didn't know I had concerning The Doctor. Nice job.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from OLA THOMAS
You created effectiveness and emphasis with your repeated question "Who is he? Nice imaginative and creative work with an element of suspense waiting to unfold in the last line.
ola thomas
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You created effectiveness and emphasis with your repeated question "Who is he? Nice imaginative and creative work with an element of suspense waiting to unfold in the last line.
ola thomas
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from royowen
You are referring course to Doctor Who, who saves the world time and again from the Dreaded Darleks, who are hell bent in destroying everything that lives. Nicely composed and presented poem as an entry in this "behind the door" poetry contest. Nice mysterious narrative, you'd probably need to know that the Tardis is the phone box time travel machine, well done well expressed work, worthy entry, well done, good luck, Blessings, Roy.
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You are referring course to Doctor Who, who saves the world time and again from the Dreaded Darleks, who are hell bent in destroying everything that lives. Nicely composed and presented poem as an entry in this "behind the door" poetry contest. Nice mysterious narrative, you'd probably need to know that the Tardis is the phone box time travel machine, well done well expressed work, worthy entry, well done, good luck, Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, a creative response to the behind the door prompt, I didn't watch dr. who so I didn't recognize who he was supposed to be. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, a creative response to the behind the door prompt, I didn't watch dr. who so I didn't recognize who he was supposed to be. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from CALLAHANMR
This is a beautiful and fascinating poem.
"Who is He?", you ask? I think there are many answers depending on you personal belief system,
For me this is my creator, who out of nothing, created the heavens and all that exists within.
He was a lonely God until in his image, He created Adam and Eve. All your answers are in my Christian Bible.
Good luck in the contest!
Roger
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This is a beautiful and fascinating poem.
"Who is He?", you ask? I think there are many answers depending on you personal belief system,
For me this is my creator, who out of nothing, created the heavens and all that exists within.
He was a lonely God until in his image, He created Adam and Eve. All your answers are in my Christian Bible.
Good luck in the contest!
Roger
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
Comment from Jackreese
Absolutely Amazing piece of work! Loved it! Love, love, LOVE Doctor Who! You did the Doctor justice! I can not wait for the next season to come out next month. I am a huge fan, and not just of the new series. I love Tom Baker, Peter Davison, and Jon Pertwee! Thank you for this piece. It put me in a great mood after reading it! I would love to fly away with the Doctor!
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Absolutely Amazing piece of work! Loved it! Love, love, LOVE Doctor Who! You did the Doctor justice! I can not wait for the next season to come out next month. I am a huge fan, and not just of the new series. I love Tom Baker, Peter Davison, and Jon Pertwee! Thank you for this piece. It put me in a great mood after reading it! I would love to fly away with the Doctor!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015