Comment from Taffspride

Excellent

I just happened across this and just wanted to say how enjoyable I found it.

You had such great imagery in so very few words. With crickets and frogs outside as I write, This truly resonated with me.

Great job

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2015

Thank you Ann:)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your one-line of thirteen syllables, haiku. Your compared the critters' sounds perfectly to a "symphony" and followed the rules to the letter. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015

Thank you Joan:)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is an interesting one-line haiku that brings to mind the croaking of the locusts and the chirping of the crickets as fall approaches. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

Thank you Jeanie:)

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Awesome! I enjoyed this little one line haiku. I intend on dabbling with this style myself. Very well crafted and what a picture you painted for the viewer.
Good luck and God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015

Thank you steve.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

An interesting angle here in this ONE LINE HAIKU on some of Nature's vibrant and exotic creators of sound and harmony and their desire to vie for 'symphony victory'- succinct

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2015

Thank you.