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2015 Haiku

Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "5/7/5 ( Never get bitten )"
A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015

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Comment from w.j.debi
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You made me laugh. I'm not a zombie fan, but I have friends that are way into zombies. They even have a zombie fun run race where part of the runners are dressed as zombies and part as humans. It is a crazy fad! Thanks for the 101 instructions. I never knew...

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Thank you :) lol I love scary movies and I've watched a lot of zombie flicks.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hi, I think this is written from a Christian perspective because you mention the teeth first that won't kill them instead of bashing in their heads which you illuminate to as a last resort. Cheers.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Hi, you can't kill zombies, they are already dead lol Thank you for the review Benjamin :)
Comment from seaglass
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Very graphic art makes statement with you wise advice for defending oneself from Zombies. One must carry a sickle for beheading and and tooth extractor to be safe these days.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    thank you seaglass :)
Comment from Joan E.
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I am not into the zombie craze, but your 5-7-5 caught my attention. Quite a scary picture, presentation and bit of advice! Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Thank you Joan :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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Oh, thank you for the advice. My little grandsons have told me there IS a way to kill a zombie. I asked, how can I kill something already dead? Well they gave me plenty of info on that topic. Cute, kicky and scary write--just in time for Halloween. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Thank you Marilyn, I love my monsters. lol Thank you for the review. :)
Comment from mermaids
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Love your poem, I now know what to do if a zombie attacks me. Your words create a clear image of these menacing creatures. Excellent 5-7-5 form to tell a zombie tale.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Thank you mermaids :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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okay, thanks for the zombie lesson in your poem and in your author notes, lol. I will just hope for this not to happen, I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Thank you Jax :)
Comment from Lovinia
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Hi Mystery Writer

YIKES! Thus is creepy and a perfect three liner for the zombie contest. I'll remember this one if I ever run into a zombie. Great presentation. The photo shots wouldn't work for me, though that sometimes happens because I'm in Australia and some of the videos are not permitted here. Couldn't I cut off my face? Oh well ...
I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Hugs - Lovi xoxo

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Oh, that is too bad, it is pretty creepy but I don't know if you are into that. I love all horror movies and books. Thank you so much for the great review. :)
reply by Lovinia on 12-Sep-2015
    I'm just on my way to review and vote in this one. Yours is the only one I've read and you've enticed me in to read the other entries. I do like the odd blood and gore ... though I like it well done. Great work. L xoxo
reply by Lovinia on 12-Sep-2015
    Well you have my vote, though Zombie Bride is pretty good. Your author's notes were great also. Haha! I wish you luck, only one vote behind ... you're still in it. Good luck. Lovi xoxo
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2015
    Thank you very much!
reply by Lovinia on 13-Sep-2015
    My pleasure. Lovi xoxo
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine entry for the zombie contest
The syllables are exact
The gory is just right
The advise is blunt
Like the instrument you'll need
to bash in their heads
Very good visuals
Good luck

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
    rspoet, thank you for your detailed and generous review. :)
Comment from Writeronboard
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This is scary and instructional at the same time. The artwork and extra blood splatter makes this a really cool visual expression of zombies. Well done and much luck to you in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2015

reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
    Thank you very much for the exceptional review and pretty six stars :) I appreciate your feedback.