Comment from MitchZ

Excellent

Very well written, I thought you were very effective with putting a deeper meaning into your lyrics. I also liked the whole flow of it as, I also felt the rhythm could be improved. It's still very well written but if something could be improved in my opinion it's that. Overall I thought it was very good and had great meaning behind it.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015

Thanks for the constructive review, . But thanks or the great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from pierre poote'

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. "Have you journeyed to the well-spring of the sea,
or walked in the valleys of the deep?
Have you ever put a harness on the wind,
and rode on the storm across the sky?" is my favorite. Good write!

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks so much Pierre, for your wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy,

Comment from XGoneX

Excellent

Hi Roy,
The word around us has a beauty and mystery hard to understand how can such thing be achieved, how can God had created such beauty and give life to everything and to us.
Liked very much the lyrics, and the questioning nature of it.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks Jade for the lovely review and great comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Roy. Lovely and simple little song/poem here mate. Beautiful flow and rhythm and it wasn't until I got to where it says (chorus) that I knew I didn't have to say it should be added to your song collection that I am still yet to order lol. Loved it cobber. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks Fez, much appreciation for the great review and comments, I appreciate you, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Alan K Pease

Exceptional

As usual you generate lots of thoughts. The American people are very fortunate to have the visit of the Pope. He generates lots of love and faith in appropriate ways. Hopefully, the politicians have listened well to his admonitions as to the clarity of his words and actions. Hope you are well. Regards Alan.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks Alan, I am well, you? Thanks for these great words, observations and very generous review, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Exceptional

Oh Roy! I'm so pleased I stopped in at the front page this morning because this is a wonderful poem. Again, so inspirational. On reading, I felt lifted up. I was going to ask you to change rode to ridden in the second verse, but as a song it probably works best this way, for the rest of the rhythm is impeccable. Most enjoyable, Giddy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks Giddy, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, glad you connected, The very generous rating is appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

What a shame you could not have attached a copy of the recording with the story. I was imagining the music, and wondered whether you'd do this with guitar or strings, but then read you'd already recorded.

I loved the imagery you created.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks Kathy, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, glad you connected, blessings, Roy.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Roy: I give you a fifteen! Great photo and witness about the majesty of God. This shows that God's ways are higher than ours. What is man that God is mindful of?

We are watching the Pope in Philidelphia. We all deserve life, liberty and happiness. God cares and sent His Holy Son. His desire is a paradise on earth not war.

Eph. 3:20 more than we can dream or imagine with Jesus. May we all sit on our Father's lap and dance with joy! I like the soar with eagles and fly on the wings of the wind. May we all share the peace of God. I like your chorus and song, Roy.
Congrats on the awards, as always, excellent! flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks dear sister and friend Nancy, I donk think any secular friends understood the implications of an almighty, wonderful God, but God had mercy and sent His son, and revealed His love, which we do understand Jesus the God/Man, thank you for the marvellous review and comments, bless my sister, Roy

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

I would love to hear the melody of this. it reads very nicely and I'm sure with music it's beautiful. The lines remind me a a psalm. God is so much larger than our minds can describe.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks For the wonderful review and remarks, , blessings, Roy.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your song poem. It is well written with a great message. The artwork is super. I like the many questions you ask of the reader. The author notes are very informative. This is a deeply spiritual poem with a great message for all. Thanks for sharing. I see no changes.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2015

Thanks Kathy, for the lovely words and delightful review, my appreciation, glad you connected, blessings, Roy.