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Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
I liked to read about your love for America and how much you value its freedom. The picture is awesome. It's a nice gesture about Brooke. I hope she gets better soon.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Hi,
I liked to read about your love for America and how much you value its freedom. The picture is awesome. It's a nice gesture about Brooke. I hope she gets better soon.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2015
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Hello Miss Lawson...did you know Jade bewitches in shades of deeper greens. Good to see you Dear...-smile- yes maam, I do and cordially invite you to also swoon in Her promise...-smile- love Michael
Comment from Janet Foor
A great patriotic piece. We do love this country and we all need to pay attention to our liberties and what we can do to keep them.
Thank you for the update on Brooke. I miss seeing her posts in my messages.
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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A great patriotic piece. We do love this country and we all need to pay attention to our liberties and what we can do to keep them.
Thank you for the update on Brooke. I miss seeing her posts in my messages.
Janet
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Hi Janet...-smile- thank you Maam....its where we were born and raised and where we'll die...its our home...-smile- bless you Lady...love Michael
Comment from amahra
proud as the praise of God come[s] alive
I'm very patriotic, so the poem, the art work of the flag, and especially the song inspired by the death of his grandfather. Great job, my friend. His voice is rough like Springsteen's.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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proud as the praise of God come[s] alive
I'm very patriotic, so the poem, the art work of the flag, and especially the song inspired by the death of his grandfather. Great job, my friend. His voice is rough like Springsteen's.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Yes Maam...I love JJ Grey...and America....-smile- Thank you for loving Her also...love Michael
Comment from Ben Colder
I am always attracted to something when seeing old Glory wave. You did well with this poem. I enjoyed much. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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I am always attracted to something when seeing old Glory wave. You did well with this poem. I enjoyed much. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Hey Ben...-smile Thank you Sir...Shalom to you also. appreciate you ..love Michael
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mikey, this is a wonderfully constructed poem about the love and the fears you have for your homeland, I too have Fears for England, it is no longer ours we have been invaded at last my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Hi Mikey, this is a wonderfully constructed poem about the love and the fears you have for your homeland, I too have Fears for England, it is no longer ours we have been invaded at last my friend.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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thanks Eric...-smile- appreciate ya man...love Michael
Comment from chasennov
free allegiance "American Rhymes" This is such a beautiful poem you have created here. It is a strong poem and sends out a meaningful message to those who suffer much. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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free allegiance "American Rhymes" This is such a beautiful poem you have created here. It is a strong poem and sends out a meaningful message to those who suffer much. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2015
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Thanks Buddy...-smile- Appreciate you taking the time...love Michael
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You are most welcome, Michael.
Comment from Neonewman
What a beautifully crafted piece you have delivered my friend! Choked me up a bit as our country seems to be falling apart. The music below brought forth the tears, I miss my grandparents so much. I know my parents are next in line as they have aged well.
God bless my friend.
Steve
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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What a beautifully crafted piece you have delivered my friend! Choked me up a bit as our country seems to be falling apart. The music below brought forth the tears, I miss my grandparents so much. I know my parents are next in line as they have aged well.
God bless my friend.
Steve
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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Hey Steve...-smile- thank you man. Yes it is...the unity of One America is being systematically torn asunder. Its up to US to wake up, take notice and stop it. before we wake up one morning in a foreign land, complete strangers to it and in it. Appreciate ya Bro. love Michael
Comment from TPAC
I feel you. Always doubted, unfortunately for me I went to school, they taught me history. And I do see. Nice tribute with so wanting dreams to come within desires. Salute.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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I feel you. Always doubted, unfortunately for me I went to school, they taught me history. And I do see. Nice tribute with so wanting dreams to come within desires. Salute.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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-salute-...thank you Sir....-smile-...Amen Brother, We need to quit being ashamed of who We are....the apple of every other eye, still has Her reasons why. love Michael
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. I love the waving flag artwork. I find the lines to be very expressive and full of meaning. I like the references to faith and freedom. The video was great. I see no changes. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking well written poem.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. I love the waving flag artwork. I find the lines to be very expressive and full of meaning. I like the references to faith and freedom. The video was great. I see no changes. Thanks for sharing a thought provoking well written poem.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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Thank you so much... appreciate you saying so....love Michael
Comment from c_lucas
America is sorely being tested and to date is being found wanted. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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America is sorely being tested and to date is being found wanted. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2015
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Hi Charlie...-smile-...Yes Sir...I know...but its "our" home...and she's fallen into disrepair from negligence and outright attempted murder. comes a time when were going to have to suit up and be the Supermen worthy of the name American. thanks man...love Michael
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American will someday has to clean house and turn back to the way we once took pride in.