Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Hold On"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from robyn corum
This is a good and pleasing write! I enjoyed these lyrics and think almost everyone can relate to them! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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This is a good and pleasing write! I enjoyed these lyrics and think almost everyone can relate to them! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
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Comment from Nosha17
I guess many songs have a theme of love where one partner is unfaithful or uncaring, then there is no reason to hold on. Good use of rhyming and well expressed words of a romance that has fizzled. faye
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I guess many songs have a theme of love where one partner is unfaithful or uncaring, then there is no reason to hold on. Good use of rhyming and well expressed words of a romance that has fizzled. faye
Comment Written 13-Oct-2015
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Comment from wordspinner314
I could easily see these lyrics being played in song. It would appeal to quite a large audience; so many people have gone through something similar. Well done and keep writing!
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I could easily see these lyrics being played in song. It would appeal to quite a large audience; so many people have gone through something similar. Well done and keep writing!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brett, another love gone wrong poem from you. Well written with good rhyme and it flows along well. Five good stanzas with a lyrical quality at which you are so good. An enjoyable read. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hi Brett, another love gone wrong poem from you. Well written with good rhyme and it flows along well. Five good stanzas with a lyrical quality at which you are so good. An enjoyable read. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
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Comment from Leineco
A-ha! Lyrics! (It makes a huge difference)
For me, lyrics allow a certain leeway that you have used quite effectively :-) They allow you to, I don't know, ping-pong I guess, through flashes of meaning. Inviting you to connect the dots not so much linearly, but instinctively :-)
A sad, sad song - with a great refrain line never had much reason to hold on, and a baseline, heart string pluck in the middle there's nothing worse than watching good love die.
Nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2015
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A-ha! Lyrics! (It makes a huge difference)
For me, lyrics allow a certain leeway that you have used quite effectively :-) They allow you to, I don't know, ping-pong I guess, through flashes of meaning. Inviting you to connect the dots not so much linearly, but instinctively :-)
A sad, sad song - with a great refrain line never had much reason to hold on, and a baseline, heart string pluck in the middle there's nothing worse than watching good love die.
Nicely done :-)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
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Comment from ann marie mazz
good morning brett
I very much like the title
never did you stray
your entry and words are song lyrics at that
the words read with flow
and yes with musicality
how sad it is when a love fades
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
enjoy the morning
ann marie
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good morning brett
I very much like the title
never did you stray
your entry and words are song lyrics at that
the words read with flow
and yes with musicality
how sad it is when a love fades
well done
thank you for sharing your talent
enjoy the morning
ann marie
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
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Comment from LeslieP5
Sad set of country of country lyrics, but I guess that is a common theme - loss of love, nothing to hold on for. Do you write music too? I hope you can get your song recorded.
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Sad set of country of country lyrics, but I guess that is a common theme - loss of love, nothing to hold on for. Do you write music too? I hope you can get your song recorded.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2015
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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Brett
_ Indeed, when love goes south, there's not gettin' it back.
_ Sadly, sometimes one doesn't know what they have til it is gone.
_ I always enjoy your songs. Good stuff.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2015
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Hi, Brett
_ Indeed, when love goes south, there's not gettin' it back.
_ Sadly, sometimes one doesn't know what they have til it is gone.
_ I always enjoy your songs. Good stuff.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
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Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your lyrics and hope you set the song to music. I admired the pathos that was conveyed and your use of the repeat to reinforce it. Here's to a serene Sunday- Joan
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I enjoyed your lyrics and hope you set the song to music. I admired the pathos that was conveyed and your use of the repeat to reinforce it. Here's to a serene Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
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Comment from c_lucas
When one relationship falters, it is time to go looking for another. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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When one relationship falters, it is time to go looking for another. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2015
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You're welcome, Brett. Charlie