2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "5/7/5 ( Living in nudist)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
19 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
Congratulations on your shared win for this wonderful entry, The image is hilarious and goes well with the poem.
Yes living in a nudist colony takes all the fun out of Halloween. Mary
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Congratulations on your shared win for this wonderful entry, The image is hilarious and goes well with the poem.
Yes living in a nudist colony takes all the fun out of Halloween. Mary
Comment Written 09-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2015
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Thank you Mary :)
Comment from Tessa Kay
How very funny and a perfect picture to go with it.
congratulations on joint first place. Well deserved. Original and humorous.
Well done. :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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How very funny and a perfect picture to go with it.
congratulations on joint first place. Well deserved. Original and humorous.
Well done. :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2015
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thank you Tessa, and congratulations. :)
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
You make a good point. Lol that is so funny! You have the perfect artwork presented as well. What a funny poem and a great entry! Good luck and happy writing!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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You make a good point. Lol that is so funny! You have the perfect artwork presented as well. What a funny poem and a great entry! Good luck and happy writing!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Thank you onyxsapphire :)
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, very good, very cute, very funny. Your poem is living proof that "normal" is in the eye of the beholder. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Happy Halloween! Don't forget to display your goodies. Lol. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Hello author, very good, very cute, very funny. Your poem is living proof that "normal" is in the eye of the beholder. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Happy Halloween! Don't forget to display your goodies. Lol. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Muffins
The turn around is hilarious. The syllable count is correct. The theme is unique as the photo. However, wearing clothes is the best costume to show up in. After all isn't Halloween all about being something that your not?
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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The turn around is hilarious. The syllable count is correct. The theme is unique as the photo. However, wearing clothes is the best costume to show up in. After all isn't Halloween all about being something that your not?
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Hello Muffins, the irony of a nudist not wearing a Halloween costume is not fun, is suppose to be funny. Maybe is not so much.
Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from MacMhuirich
This is so humorous, it's something I have never thought about. This is my sense of humour. I once had to go and look at some work in a nudist camp. They were all hiding. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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This is so humorous, it's something I have never thought about. This is my sense of humour. I once had to go and look at some work in a nudist camp. They were all hiding. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Thank you, I appreciate your kind review. :)
Comment from mfowler
I guess the nudists could put on face or body paint. I can imagine some quite funny monsters painted on a nudist. You've touched the funny bone with this Halloween howler. An easy poem to catch the inference. Perhaps there are more than one funnies to be imagined in reader's mind. I don't think you even needed to add the notes. Best of luck with this.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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I guess the nudists could put on face or body paint. I can imagine some quite funny monsters painted on a nudist. You've touched the funny bone with this Halloween howler. An easy poem to catch the inference. Perhaps there are more than one funnies to be imagined in reader's mind. I don't think you even needed to add the notes. Best of luck with this.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Hello mfowler, I was hoping people would get the joke-being a nudist in Halloween is not fun because they don't wear costumes. But not too many people are getting it. I am glad you did. Thank you for awesome review.
Comment from c_lucas
In most if not all nudist camp, they dress for dinner. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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In most if not all nudist camp, they dress for dinner. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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thank you lucas :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Carole Rosa
To the author of "Nudist Colony Flashers". Way toooo funny. There used to be a nudist colony in my neighborhood sixty years ago. All the kids on the school bus would run over to the side of the bus, hoping to get a view of something they all wondered about!!! Too funny. Good luck in the contest. This cartoon is just perfect! Carole
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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To the author of "Nudist Colony Flashers". Way toooo funny. There used to be a nudist colony in my neighborhood sixty years ago. All the kids on the school bus would run over to the side of the bus, hoping to get a view of something they all wondered about!!! Too funny. Good luck in the contest. This cartoon is just perfect! Carole
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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Thank you Carole, I appreciate your awesome review. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
some people like to pull pranks during the Halloween TIME OF THE YEAR SOME SO EXOTIC AND SOME SO OUT OF THE MAIN FRAME OF THINGS ENOUGH TO SAY ITS DIRTY
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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some people like to pull pranks during the Halloween TIME OF THE YEAR SOME SO EXOTIC AND SOME SO OUT OF THE MAIN FRAME OF THINGS ENOUGH TO SAY ITS DIRTY
Comment Written 06-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2015
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thank you :)
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