2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "5/7/5 (be more like a tree)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
42 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
Congrats on the Win Gypsy! Well deserved!!!
Without a doubt - two essential traits for navigating through life :-)
Very nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
Congrats on the Win Gypsy! Well deserved!!!
Without a doubt - two essential traits for navigating through life :-)
Very nicely done :-)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review. I appreciate it very much. :)
gypsy
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The first two lines are strong and clear. The last line says it all.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The first two lines are strong and clear. The last line says it all.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review
Comment from NJK62
Well done. This is an impressive haiku. The extended metaphor of the tree is deeply resonant: 'flexible limbs' suggest accommodation and sensitivity whilst the 'deep' grounding suggests wisdom and reliability. You certainly use this natural image highly effectively to comment upon the human condition. Well done again.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
Well done. This is an impressive haiku. The extended metaphor of the tree is deeply resonant: 'flexible limbs' suggest accommodation and sensitivity whilst the 'deep' grounding suggests wisdom and reliability. You certainly use this natural image highly effectively to comment upon the human condition. Well done again.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much, I really appreciate the excellent review. :)
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Pleasure.
Comment from Chrissy710
wow Gypsy Congratulation on a well deserved win. ( I'm sorry I missed this post but have just found it tonight and what a great statement for a 5-7-5 ) this is great and says such a lot in you 3 lines. People flexibility is vital for a harmonous society But sometimes too late if the roots are too imbedded, So nurture the young roots and keep them flexible while establishing their place in the ground. Good work Cheers Christineð???
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
wow Gypsy Congratulation on a well deserved win. ( I'm sorry I missed this post but have just found it tonight and what a great statement for a 5-7-5 ) this is great and says such a lot in you 3 lines. People flexibility is vital for a harmonous society But sometimes too late if the roots are too imbedded, So nurture the young roots and keep them flexible while establishing their place in the ground. Good work Cheers Christineð???
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, MariVal
_ Hey, congrats on the win!
_ Love the presentation for this 5.7.5.
_ It's easy to see why you won, my friend.
_ Great job. (*<*)
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
Hi, MariVal
_ Hey, congrats on the win!
_ Love the presentation for this 5.7.5.
_ It's easy to see why you won, my friend.
_ Great job. (*<*)
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from MacMhuirich
Wonderful job with your 5-7-5 contest entry. I like the idea of being like a tree, we have rich periods and barren periods in life but if our roots are grounded we will flourish again. Well done on winning the contest.
Bless you
John
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
Wonderful job with your 5-7-5 contest entry. I like the idea of being like a tree, we have rich periods and barren periods in life but if our roots are grounded we will flourish again. Well done on winning the contest.
Bless you
John
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from amada
I think this 5-7-5 poem about a tree has a very philosophical innuendo. I like that! Deeply grounded to stand the storms of the seasons, flexible to adapt...just life life.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
I think this 5-7-5 poem about a tree has a very philosophical innuendo. I like that! Deeply grounded to stand the storms of the seasons, flexible to adapt...just life life.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from pharp
Excellent job in the penning of this 5-7-5 contest entry. Few words can say a lot, and that is exactly what you have done in the penning of this poem. Beautiful artwork and great presentation. I have read all of the entries, but this is the winner in my eyes. You have my vote. Blessings...................Portia
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
Excellent job in the penning of this 5-7-5 contest entry. Few words can say a lot, and that is exactly what you have done in the penning of this poem. Beautiful artwork and great presentation. I have read all of the entries, but this is the winner in my eyes. You have my vote. Blessings...................Portia
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
If that does not equal a tree hugger what does? Well written poem depicting this theme very nicely indeed. Should also be a good contest entry.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
If that does not equal a tree hugger what does? Well written poem depicting this theme very nicely indeed. Should also be a good contest entry.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Thank you Brett, I appreciate your excellent review.
Comment from evilynne
I guess we all should be like a tree; your little poem is well worded and thought provoking, the picture a fitting compliment. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
I guess we all should be like a tree; your little poem is well worded and thought provoking, the picture a fitting compliment. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 18-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2015
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Thank you Evi, I appreciate your excellent review. :)