Zombie Angst
Literature At the Next Level25 total reviews
Comment from Sefiros
Suffice to say this is one twist I didn't see coming. Can you imagine if zombies had sexual compulsions in addition to the host of zombie-ness traits? Nice way to give an old concept some new blood. Good luck with the next one.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Suffice to say this is one twist I didn't see coming. Can you imagine if zombies had sexual compulsions in addition to the host of zombie-ness traits? Nice way to give an old concept some new blood. Good luck with the next one.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Thank you! This was a lot of fun. Yep, poor zombies, there's more to life than eating brains. LOL
Comment from BillyCraven
holy shit, that was revolting and hilarious and appalling and fun and gross and clever and disgusting, and i read it all!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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holy shit, that was revolting and hilarious and appalling and fun and gross and clever and disgusting, and i read it all!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Cool. Just the response I was hoping for. Hahaha! Thanks, mikey
Comment from Green Lake Girl
You have my vote, Mikey. What a hideous romp! You took this prompt and made it your bitch. Your imagery is disgusting and appalling. "You can really slurp and jerk?" Hilarious. Extra funny that he tries to "do his best." Well done!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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You have my vote, Mikey. What a hideous romp! You took this prompt and made it your bitch. Your imagery is disgusting and appalling. "You can really slurp and jerk?" Hilarious. Extra funny that he tries to "do his best." Well done!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi. Thank you so much. I'm so pleased you enjoyed. One of those ones where you wonder if you should really press enter. Hahaha! mikey
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I hear ya! But that's what FanStory is for--experimentation.
Comment from sibhus
What a sick twisted demented poem, which of course I totally love. I seriously laughed my ass off at this. This is a brilliant stretch of the imagination. Only some one with you sense of wit could have written such an amusing bit of zombie erotica, ha, ha.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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What a sick twisted demented poem, which of course I totally love. I seriously laughed my ass off at this. This is a brilliant stretch of the imagination. Only some one with you sense of wit could have written such an amusing bit of zombie erotica, ha, ha.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Sick, twisted, demented ... all music to my ears!!!
So delighted you had fun with this. I know I did. Hahaha!
Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I have never thought of zombies acting and behaving in this way before, but they must have sexual feelings too.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. I have never thought of zombies acting and behaving in this way before, but they must have sexual feelings too.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Sure, there's more to life than eating brains, yes?
Thank you kindly, mikey
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My pleasure
Comment from doggymad
Talk about following contest instructions. This was brilliant. Actually some of it was hilarious, the rest was like fishing around in guts lol.
Best of luck in the contest
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Talk about following contest instructions. This was brilliant. Actually some of it was hilarious, the rest was like fishing around in guts lol.
Best of luck in the contest
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Yep, the instructions made me do it. I'm an innocent bystander. :))
Thank you so much, mikey
Comment from Pantygynt
This is delightfully awful, as of course it is supposed to be and I know that with a field as strong as this I am going to have a job making up my mind. Do I vote on basis of awfulness or the most erotic? I shall have to see.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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This is delightfully awful, as of course it is supposed to be and I know that with a field as strong as this I am going to have a job making up my mind. Do I vote on basis of awfulness or the most erotic? I shall have to see.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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I had to laugh at the quality of the entries. Ha! All of that talent brought to bear on zombies having sex. Gotta go with erotic. One or two of these has a couple lines that God help me are HOT!!! mikey
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mikey
Literature at the Next Level ... and beyond, I'd say!!! lol
I was a bit stunned at first read ... how the hell do you know so much about my personal life?? :))
I suppose telepathic communications haven't reached copyright laws yet! Of course I only thought of suing while my brain was whole ... now it's half-sucked and I'm thinking differently. In fact, I'm flattered my erotic life has been helpful to your muse.
OMG! This is a bizarre contest and could only be concocted by Gloria ... that gal's mind, and where it goes ... *wink*
Perhaps the voter's minds won't go this far out!!!! hee hee ... but you've got my vote. Sorry Craig and Gloria ... you were there ... then I read Mikey's.
Fabulous presentation ... my stalker's driver's license photo came out well. Ooops ... this isn't about ME! I just recognised the gal in the image ... well we all know what she gets up to in the foul prowl hours... and it 'aint purrdy.
You did well with the rhyme and the brain-fried meter ... is the stuff in the brackets a disclaimer?? Hahaha!
Please, anyone reading this ... this is not ME! Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
Christmas Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi Mikey
Literature at the Next Level ... and beyond, I'd say!!! lol
I was a bit stunned at first read ... how the hell do you know so much about my personal life?? :))
I suppose telepathic communications haven't reached copyright laws yet! Of course I only thought of suing while my brain was whole ... now it's half-sucked and I'm thinking differently. In fact, I'm flattered my erotic life has been helpful to your muse.
OMG! This is a bizarre contest and could only be concocted by Gloria ... that gal's mind, and where it goes ... *wink*
Perhaps the voter's minds won't go this far out!!!! hee hee ... but you've got my vote. Sorry Craig and Gloria ... you were there ... then I read Mikey's.
Fabulous presentation ... my stalker's driver's license photo came out well. Ooops ... this isn't about ME! I just recognised the gal in the image ... well we all know what she gets up to in the foul prowl hours... and it 'aint purrdy.
You did well with the rhyme and the brain-fried meter ... is the stuff in the brackets a disclaimer?? Hahaha!
Please, anyone reading this ... this is not ME! Wishing you the best of luck in the contest.
Christmas Hugs - Lovi xoxoxo
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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I'm not sure who got a hold of Lovi's computer, but I'd like to thank them for this great review.
This was the MOST fun. I can't believe we all jumped right in with all of our skills and gave it our best. Hahaha! World peace will just have to wait. These zombies is horny!!!!!
Well, tell Lovi when she returns from her Halo polishing that I hope she has a beautiful Christmas and the Happiest of New Years. Hugs, mikey :))
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Lovi's gremlins are in charge at the moment ... Lovi has had her halo polished and she's in confession trying to get us a reprieve for all our sins. We finally found her chocolate stash -- and at MIDNIGHT which means we all turn into zombie gremlins and enjoy reviewing all zombie writes. This one particularly delighted us and we thought you should have won... we're saving it to read again on New Year's eve to ensure our copious multiplication and world take-over in 2016... when ALL zombie poets will be exalted and hailed as gods.
I'm sure she'd thank you for your Christmas and New Years wishes and send hers in return to you and your crowded table. We find hugs - bah humbug, but she likes them. :))
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Comment from Michaelk
Dude, that was disgustingly brilliant. You're becoming more Deanlike every day. :) Not that that's a bad thing.
What can I say, your descriptions are brutal and yet mildly arousing. I must admit, I've sometimes wondered what zombies do when they aren't eating brains. I guess now I know.
Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Dude, that was disgustingly brilliant. You're becoming more Deanlike every day. :) Not that that's a bad thing.
What can I say, your descriptions are brutal and yet mildly arousing. I must admit, I've sometimes wondered what zombies do when they aren't eating brains. I guess now I know.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hey, Mike
Disgustingly brilliant is what I have LONGED to hear. I actually got hold of some video taken in Dean's crypt. The writing was a simple matter of describing what I saw. HOT, HOT, HOT!!!
mikey
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading your well presented and described zombie erotic poem. The tale flowed smoothly with graphic humor that brought a smile. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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I enjoyed reading your well presented and described zombie erotic poem. The tale flowed smoothly with graphic humor that brought a smile. Marilyn
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Loved yours too, Marilyn
Jeesh. What were we thinking? Hahaha! Well, it was fun. Smiles are good things, yes? mikey