Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "There You Are"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from chasennov
What Goes Around Comes Around. There You Are.' You've said it! What goes around comes around. Love is a many splendored thing and this type of thing happens all the time, cheating, affairs etc. I thought this song lyrics poetry could have been so much better if it had rhythm and rhyming. In order to be successful, I feel you need to improve this piece quite a bit.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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What Goes Around Comes Around. There You Are.' You've said it! What goes around comes around. Love is a many splendored thing and this type of thing happens all the time, cheating, affairs etc. I thought this song lyrics poetry could have been so much better if it had rhythm and rhyming. In order to be successful, I feel you need to improve this piece quite a bit.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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At least I write original work and do not try to pass off somebody else's writing as my own original work as you are famous for doing.
Then striking back in a false sense of retaliation when called out about it.
What you have to say means far less than NOTHING to me.
It just proves your ignorance and your less than desirable character.
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Please refrain from reviewing any of my work in future. You are the type of person FanStorians are complaining about. You've had a taste of your own medicine, and you're liable to have more. Nothing of your work is original.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Good song lyrics / free verse. It sounds like a good ol' country song to be. You do song lyric very well Brett.
teresa
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Good song lyrics / free verse. It sounds like a good ol' country song to be. You do song lyric very well Brett.
teresa
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Comment from teols2016
Okay, I can't reproduce these lyrics. Can I praise them? Well, I'm going to anyway. Well written. You set a powerful scene with strong emotions to boost. If you ever perform this anywhere, post the video alongside this. I think it will be quite something. Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Okay, I can't reproduce these lyrics. Can I praise them? Well, I'm going to anyway. Well written. You set a powerful scene with strong emotions to boost. If you ever perform this anywhere, post the video alongside this. I think it will be quite something. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Comment from lindafisher
Powerful emotions here. This poem left me feeling sad. Love is something to be cherished but all to often these days people have several relationships at once. There is always pain and heartache for someone, as your lovely poem depicts. It is a beautiful poem, beautifully written. Regards Linda.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Powerful emotions here. This poem left me feeling sad. Love is something to be cherished but all to often these days people have several relationships at once. There is always pain and heartache for someone, as your lovely poem depicts. It is a beautiful poem, beautifully written. Regards Linda.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Comment from chcbeck
Very good lyrics the emotion of hurt knowing that your being used are powerful. I am sure many people have encountered a relationship where one person always feels used. A great job.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Very good lyrics the emotion of hurt knowing that your being used are powerful. I am sure many people have encountered a relationship where one person always feels used. A great job.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Comment from littlebit69
You don't miss what you have until you loose it. Now he wants you back. I've quit boy friends in my life and sometimes I went back, and sometimes I didn't. I hope, that if you did go back I hope it worked for you. Beautiful lyrics.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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You don't miss what you have until you loose it. Now he wants you back. I've quit boy friends in my life and sometimes I went back, and sometimes I didn't. I hope, that if you did go back I hope it worked for you. Beautiful lyrics.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Another one of your lyric poems - well written in abcbdefe rhyme with good rhythm. Good story of lost love which you write about a lot. Good read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Another one of your lyric poems - well written in abcbdefe rhyme with good rhythm. Good story of lost love which you write about a lot. Good read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Comment from Chris Walker
Excellent! Flawless flow. Your words easily relate the disappointment and regret at being the source of your lover's pain as well as the source of the subject's own pain. Hard to see your love being loved by another.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Excellent! Flawless flow. Your words easily relate the disappointment and regret at being the source of your lover's pain as well as the source of the subject's own pain. Hard to see your love being loved by another.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Comment from robyn corum
BMW,
Another great set of crying-in-my-beer kind of lyrics that we Southerners love! *smile* I think these are some of the best I've read of yours. Hope something big comes out of them! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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BMW,
Another great set of crying-in-my-beer kind of lyrics that we Southerners love! *smile* I think these are some of the best I've read of yours. Hope something big comes out of them! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Comment from bob cullen
Very country. Who would you like to sing this. To me it sounds a neat fit for someone like Sara Evans. Or would you prefer a male singer. Do you write the music as well. Have you had many songs recorded?
May I ask a question of a different kind? What do you know about a company called Paramount Song. Someone here suggested I submit several pieces of my works to them. But I'd like to know more about them before offering my work.
Thanks, Brett,
Bob Cullen
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Very country. Who would you like to sing this. To me it sounds a neat fit for someone like Sara Evans. Or would you prefer a male singer. Do you write the music as well. Have you had many songs recorded?
May I ask a question of a different kind? What do you know about a company called Paramount Song. Someone here suggested I submit several pieces of my works to them. But I'd like to know more about them before offering my work.
Thanks, Brett,
Bob Cullen
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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They are what we in Nashville refer to as a Song Mill.
And, there are several others around Music City like them.
You submit your lyrics and they will put music to them, for a fee.
The tip off is that they charge you for their services.
No legit record company does, even if all you submit are lyrics.
Although the chances of ever getting just lyrics signed to a publishing contract are nil.
And, this is music that may not necessarily even fit the lyrics.
Then they will send you a Demo Copy of that recording.
For a vanity thing why not?
If that is all you are looking for.
(And, even that is extremely doubtful).
Expect to pay probably about $100.00 or so for the recording.
If you seek the real thing, professional Songwriters and legitimate record companies would recommend you avoid them like the plague.
I know of some writers who have had experiences both ways with them.
They lucked up once upon a time, and had one of their recordings that actually got picked up by a legit record label.
They brag about that on their home page, from what I have been told.
Keep in mind it was their only successful Demo.
So, the call would be what you are looking for?
Hope that helps.
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Thank you so much for such a detailed and knowledgeable reply. I'll take your advice and give them a miss. I really appreciate your assistance,
Bob Cullen