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Comment from Ricky1024
Lola sounds like my ex man see you I let have positioned my credit card and so she decide to write the number down and start paying our own bills without my permission but since it through Social Security government it's a federal offense but the people like that we all have there too when I sing along with tapping on his head I think of her smacking me across the face and me one time spinning water in her face because she likes to practice I will let me know mommy for this route well-written Michael 24
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
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Lola sounds like my ex man see you I let have positioned my credit card and so she decide to write the number down and start paying our own bills without my permission but since it through Social Security government it's a federal offense but the people like that we all have there too when I sing along with tapping on his head I think of her smacking me across the face and me one time spinning water in her face because she likes to practice I will let me know mommy for this route well-written Michael 24
Comment Written 07-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2016
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yea this one likes to practice too...
Ricky always remember this- love is NOT Glen Close....
and release the safety before firing. love Michael
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
When I first read this, I didn't understand it at all. Now I do. You really are angry, and rightfully so, Michael. It's good to get those feelings out, they can destroy you locked inside. I hope soon you will be able to write a nice one again. Love you, Micheal. xx Sandy.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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When I first read this, I didn't understand it at all. Now I do. You really are angry, and rightfully so, Michael. It's good to get those feelings out, they can destroy you locked inside. I hope soon you will be able to write a nice one again. Love you, Micheal. xx Sandy.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2016
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yes I am.
very disappointed and some what amazed.
I wish this dark comedy of a life would win the lottery...just once. Thank you Sandy. Yea I wrote five seven five...but got embarrassed and disabled it. I'll try to make the sunshine one more time...but I'm running out rain dances Sandy...i got a tell ya...-smile-. love you back...michael
Comment from Nika2016
I am giving four stars only because my rating does not count. Your writing , as usual is unique and well-written. Obviously, you were angry when you wrote this. You refer to Gauguin who cultivated two persona: One as that of a wild man and the other a sensitive artist. Neither were true representations of his identity. Is it possible that you are seeing the mask of the woman you denigrate? Both author and song refer to her using a double standard for men and women. The singer puts her down for wanting to be in control of herself. Why shouldn't she be? He says she acts like a man because she desires the act of love. Why is this a male prerogative? Are we stating that women are not allowed the full range of expression? The opening animation makes me sad. You have 108 views and three responses. Clearly, you did not intend to have 108 reviews. In closing, I think that your quirky poems are some of the best writing on the site. I wish I could hear more of Magdalene and similar poems. Not trying to tell you how/what to write. Just expressing a preference. Peace..Michael. Nika
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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I am giving four stars only because my rating does not count. Your writing , as usual is unique and well-written. Obviously, you were angry when you wrote this. You refer to Gauguin who cultivated two persona: One as that of a wild man and the other a sensitive artist. Neither were true representations of his identity. Is it possible that you are seeing the mask of the woman you denigrate? Both author and song refer to her using a double standard for men and women. The singer puts her down for wanting to be in control of herself. Why shouldn't she be? He says she acts like a man because she desires the act of love. Why is this a male prerogative? Are we stating that women are not allowed the full range of expression? The opening animation makes me sad. You have 108 views and three responses. Clearly, you did not intend to have 108 reviews. In closing, I think that your quirky poems are some of the best writing on the site. I wish I could hear more of Magdalene and similar poems. Not trying to tell you how/what to write. Just expressing a preference. Peace..Michael. Nika
Comment Written 03-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Really...? I hadn't noticed... the campaign of nut on. maam....this is about my personal problem found haunted by...not yours.
you have outlet as well...I do not write for you or any ...body else. I have a raving lunatic making up make believe about me and even Houston cops...and I'm sick of it. so thanks for your thoughts...these are mine. love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
Your animated illustrations are always so eye catching, along with your references--in this case Gauguin. Your alliteration of "g's, c's and p's" added to the intensity of this piece. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Your animated illustrations are always so eye catching, along with your references--in this case Gauguin. Your alliteration of "g's, c's and p's" added to the intensity of this piece. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Why thank you Joan ...I shop upscale.
yes yes Gaugin apparently had some fetishes and what not...rather sick-o in private affair they say. I didn't know that before I wrote this but we live and learn....and hope to survive the encounter. However, in the end...it always kills ya. love michael
Comment from l.raven
sounds like you had an encounter with a dark ally Michael.
I told you running around the neighborhood late at night was dangerous. I sure hope she finds herself. love you Linda
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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sounds like you had an encounter with a dark ally Michael.
I told you running around the neighborhood late at night was dangerous. I sure hope she finds herself. love you Linda
Comment Written 02-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2016
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yes i think it safe to say ...living with a graceless woman is what milk gives to cereal....mushy cornflake appeal....-smile-...Thank you Dear. love michael