The Need
contest entry8 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yech - the imagery this evokes put me off my luncheon plans. (LOL) (Kidding, of course.) Best of luck in the contest with this tiny horror gem! You've managed to say a whole lot in very few words - kudos!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Yech - the imagery this evokes put me off my luncheon plans. (LOL) (Kidding, of course.) Best of luck in the contest with this tiny horror gem! You've managed to say a whole lot in very few words - kudos!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much Dawn.
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My pleasure.
Comment from w.j.debi
An effective presentation which meets the contest rules. You paint a gruesome picture of the dying predator following its instincts to the final moment of life. Scary! Perfect color choice for your formatting to add intensity. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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An effective presentation which meets the contest rules. You paint a gruesome picture of the dying predator following its instincts to the final moment of life. Scary! Perfect color choice for your formatting to add intensity. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much, truly appreciated.
Comment from chcbeck
I like your style , your syllable count fits the prompt, and the red writing, I like the fact you have not actually named an animal just focusing on the teeth. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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I like your style , your syllable count fits the prompt, and the red writing, I like the fact you have not actually named an animal just focusing on the teeth. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thanks, CHC, much appreciated.
Comment from fafa
a poem for contest that denotes thesuggestion of the author for the repulsiveidea of the canivalismo, greeted it,congratulations
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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a poem for contest that denotes thesuggestion of the author for the repulsiveidea of the canivalismo, greeted it,congratulations
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much, truly appreciated.
Comment from Javed05
Very brief write up. Don't know how to review this brief piece. Never written such a brief poem. This piece depicts carnivorous well. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Very brief write up. Don't know how to review this brief piece. Never written such a brief poem. This piece depicts carnivorous well. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much Javed.
Comment from jmdg1954
Whoa baby. That's some scary stuff. First the red for blood against the black background suited the poem perfectly.
Then speaking of perfection, your poem nailed it. I'm just sorry I have no sixes left to reward.
Keep that carnivore's hunger caged in.
Best of luck in the contest. John
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Whoa baby. That's some scary stuff. First the red for blood against the black background suited the poem perfectly.
Then speaking of perfection, your poem nailed it. I'm just sorry I have no sixes left to reward.
Keep that carnivore's hunger caged in.
Best of luck in the contest. John
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much for the six "thought," as well as the kind review and the "blood red" stars LOL.
Comment from RodG
An interesting perspective as we look at this carnivore in ITS final moments. Was it a battle to the death of each? My imagination conjures dinosaurs because of the "bared teeth" sinking into flesh. Instinct dictates all actions even in this creature's death throes.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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An interesting perspective as we look at this carnivore in ITS final moments. Was it a battle to the death of each? My imagination conjures dinosaurs because of the "bared teeth" sinking into flesh. Instinct dictates all actions even in this creature's death throes.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thanks, Rod, Your time and review are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Dr. Nad
The Need is a nice'5-7-5' on the theme of ONE flesh-eating animal, NOT HUMAN. You have given us the bare essence of the carnivore. In the three lines that you share with us your reader comes face-to-face with a sense of desperate fear. Bared teeth will do that for you! LOL good luck in the contest. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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The Need is a nice'5-7-5' on the theme of ONE flesh-eating animal, NOT HUMAN. You have given us the bare essence of the carnivore. In the three lines that you share with us your reader comes face-to-face with a sense of desperate fear. Bared teeth will do that for you! LOL good luck in the contest. May God bless you!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much Dr.N, for your thoughtful review and "blood red" stars.
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!
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You are very welcome,
Embrace the Love from above!