Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi sweetie, very well written you....and I love your picture...reminds me of Grace when she goes under water...looks just like her...I'm glad you rowed home baby...your my last read tonight...I love your poem...goddnight...tomorrow...love you Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

ah well I like it...-smile-
thank you Dear, always a pleasure when you're near. love Michael

reply by l.raven on 01-Mar-2016

yes it is Baby...love being near...love Linda xxoo

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

"Michael rowed home long ago....."

Out of this entire poem...that line stuck with me the most. It's a lot of unspoken meaning behind it...

I think what fascinates me about your poems is that they are so mysterious, yet so filling to the creative spirit. They are emotional. And that song. My gosh!

Keep writing...Magnificent and I don't have a six...I guess I am a true fan...

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016

Hi Nic...-smile-
ah just messing around....love the song found the picture and tried to explain....lol...ah haha....one of these days life's going to happen upon me and you guys are going to miss this...lol love Michael

Comment from Nika2016

Excellent

Rorschach ink blot
duplicitous design define crime
symbolic symmetry this cold sea where daughters swim free
the embryo is freedom
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As usual, provocative.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

I found the song very passionate...i'd already used a year or so ago...but found myself listening again. then i found the picture of the woman floating in an ocean of white noise....and wondered ....haha...it relaxes me. love Michael

reply by Nika2016 on 02-Mar-2016

Michael...we wait for a new one...Where are you?

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I have to say the nymph you chose resembles you--hair color and shape of her face--meant as a compliment! You did not sound "hollow" to me as your "rowed" the boat to the faraway shore. Hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

Hi J...-smile-
hm...I could of a swore I wore a D-cup. I think mine bigger Joan...if you look closer. of course its a compliment...every dudes dream is to be compared to his twin sister...good looking out...-wink-....well I'm sure I will now....that I've been castrated. I want to thank you for stopping by today J....and teaching me soprano .-smile-...ahahaha...love Michael

reply by Joan E. on 25-Feb-2016

Enjoy your new singing career as a soprano! lol -Joan

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

10-4 couch....-handwave-

Comment from Joyce Long

Excellent

I find abstract poetry difficult to understand. I write children's literature so you know I have a simple mind. This is interesting and seems well done. Quite a picture with the movement in it. I do agree that we are each our own person-solo-which is life. My mate of all these years still isn't me and we share different views on life. Very well done.
Joyce 02-25-16

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

Hi Joyce...-smile-

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

dog gummit....whoops...thank you Joyce. I dont see the world as ...hm..."ordered" ah -headtilt-...you know in makes sense kind a way....or kind a sense expected or planned....most of the time the "sense" is found alomg the journey or at the end looking back. so thats how i see it and reveal it. I'm hoping there is a world of make sense order though....somewhere...-smile- love Michael

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A very interesting poem rich with layers of meaning. I love the artwork as it drew me first into your fantasy poem.

The words were cryptic and alluring, begging the reader to further explore their meaning.

Well done,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

Hi Rhonda...-smile-
well thank you...happy you enjoyed. have a great day....love Michael

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

I'm broke I get money from him again I'm strong and asking for when I see him nice work here Michael as usual deep and wonderfully crafted with a little touch of Jesus to spice it up be sure to catch my latest post the really mean and green cabbage head family with you would be coming out soon Ricky 10:24 be sur

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

Whats up Doc...-smile-
I thank you and will certainly check out the cabbage heads. love michael