Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like the line about your son's soul being seen, it reminds all of us that we continue to live on in a spiritual form. I also like the verse where you speak to God and ask him what to do. It is true to life and impacts the reader.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2016

hi baby I think you I think you told me one time I never replies to me that your name is ion you know I'm not but anyhow I'll call you beautiful so this beautiful sea goddess of the sea thanks for your kindly spiritual thoughts on my spiritual peace just touching heaven pieces already gotten recognized all time in a blue ribbon if there was in the corporate of amount of rewards you can get on fan stories I would run the same office I like cookies my son deserves it'll be about 3 weeks to a 13 years since I lost and I mean it I'm going to tell everyone I wake up I think of them when I go to sleep I talk to him and I was going to take me and he takes me to sleep with him 2 or 3 minutes cause I have to do with that say that if I can't sleepso that's good but I've come to realize some really deep thoughts on resurrection deaths afterlife spiritual world of being spiritual children the spiritual world and giving the body comes through the veil of forgetfulness and then forget who we were before and then start over every human being has had a second chance I don't know it so they were in some form treaties of lesser form it could be is something this is merely is an ant created millions of years ago or or a cat that passed away that two days ago you know given another chance of even being the most people people don't realize it I've talked to people that knew in human form who they were before so it works you can come back from human out of human again instead of from a lesser left thumb from my writing abilities which have grown immensely over the years and it's something that I wasn't born with it or something that wasn't me it was something that was putting me after tragedy device Sheriff's oh so anybody reviews my work for this from the mind which is cool but mine and hearts better in my heart as soon as exceptional but nobody can do it mind heart soul from the bus I've not seen it I sing it to a closeness degree but not spiritually and even ask I've seen it sounds very good right on a site like Michael I reconcile and reviewed his work which is highly deep like mine and then mix my style but everybody has their own personal style that you know so I will keep following each other here and we keep growing each and every day and abilities everybody does I know you know that so I have a nice day darling and I post a name again alright bye

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

I had a friend who died in the VA and donated his body to various organ organizations. He thinking near yours. A little touch of Heaven, I suppose. I die that you may live.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

thank you very much for your time and I only review but since you're helping this become an all-time recognize status from this now on the welcoming page Ricky 10:24

Comment from Mary Wakeford

Excellent

I am very sorry for the loss of your son, and then your wife. Horrible, unspeakable tragedies, both. It must have been very hard for you to relive this time in your life, but also I hope some kind of a catharsis in doing so. And what an honorable thing to donate so you son lives on in four people now.

The only suggestion I could make after reading about your son was a misplaced 'd' in the following line:

"And after that, MY Son finally d realized and was released... "

My heart goes out to you and your family.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

thank you ever so much Mary for your time in presenting presentation review comments and revi's on its way deserve it just like my son of course for what he's done Ricky I saw on the way to all time best soil appreciate your review and everybody else it's happening it's on its way deserve it just like my son of course for what he's done Ricky 10:24

Comment from fafa

Excellent

You work the text of a very special form,the prose content seems very good to me,the topic is interesting because you showhow giving it is possible to obtain more,this is important, greetings

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

Thanks for your review for Rickythanks

Comment from Caveman1

Exceptional

A very touching read... with life information that just might save someone else's life in terms of 'Organ- Tissue' donations. The reader absorbs the pain and love that this author illustrates with his passionate words of loss and enduring love.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

thanks for the six star rating on the heavens Shelby doesn't show up because it's on its way to all time best which is hard to do as you well know Ricky 10:24

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Riccy, this is a really heartbreaking story that left me with a tear in my eye and a lump in my throat, I thought I had been to heel and back but your tale tears at the heartstrings my friend.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

I can imagine this affected you Eric so because you would not want to walk the path and walk in my shoes for a you know what it would do to you to lose your son thanks ever so much Ricky 10:24

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

You've been through so much, Ricky, and it's enough to test the faith of the most stalwart believer.

I chose to read the first part of your post through what I call a mental squint. I read only for content and gave my intuition full leash.

If I'm correct your writing is for you. It helps keep your contact with your deeper self and, perhaps, with your savior.

Thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

why thanks J Squires for your thoughts on it home and also the cracking process it's been cashed her phone so it still need to be cleaned up a discipline back to what it is on its way all times best recognize the song welcome page I got that message today so long it needs I think 22 reviews all Ricky 10:24

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Magnificent. You never text me back about the FB Twitter of a tweet to let me know. This is great as expected when I see you and your penning signature.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

thank you for this Angie if you had to put you in my poetry and writing club on Facebook you got to give me your full name so I can friend request and then I'll instruct you on what to do after work alright thanks byewant me to

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Your pain is obvious, but I think there comes a time when life does move on. You have to get there yet, but working on it doesn't harm. Ulla

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016

thank you Lord for this this is your first time reviewing any of my work so I very much appreciate the 5 stars6 stars would be better and then I'll return the favor catching my latest piece and now I pronounce you chuck and wife Vicki 1024

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

A very good piece-I can feel your pain and emotion's. Your words are well chosen. Of course the artwork compliments the theme.

Thanks for sharing--
Bill

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

Thanks Bill.
Ricky 1024.