Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "5-7-5 and the wild winds blew"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from DonandVicki
Subtle satire and good alteration that makes this poem stand out. You seem to pack a lot of meaning in to so few words. Excellent 5 7 5
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Subtle satire and good alteration that makes this poem stand out. You seem to pack a lot of meaning in to so few words. Excellent 5 7 5
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind review!
Comment from Ricky1024
if you recall writer The Perfect Storm was not so perfect wind as that poor ship was pushed around by finally a tidal wave and it took them down to the bottom of the sea where they were trapped in Davy Jones Locker forever and ever and can you remember the captain of the ship he is quite a looker definitely any woman's dream if you know who I'm talking about if you know what I mean would you give him a date would you give the time of day or would you singing a lullaby to sleedishworld on Ricky LOL thanks for dishworld on Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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if you recall writer The Perfect Storm was not so perfect wind as that poor ship was pushed around by finally a tidal wave and it took them down to the bottom of the sea where they were trapped in Davy Jones Locker forever and ever and can you remember the captain of the ship he is quite a looker definitely any woman's dream if you know who I'm talking about if you know what I mean would you give him a date would you give the time of day or would you singing a lullaby to sleedishworld on Ricky LOL thanks for dishworld on Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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What?
Comment from Ben Colder
Nothing wrong with this 5-7-5. Great message for the photo. No doubt a winner. Thanks for sharing. Best to you in the race. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Nothing wrong with this 5-7-5. Great message for the photo. No doubt a winner. Thanks for sharing. Best to you in the race. Hope you win.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review!