Agility starting for Smokey.
A story poem about Smokey's start in agility.25 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Robina, very good for both dog and owner to go exercising. A well written little poem about Smokey. Did you mean agility classes? All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Hi Robina, very good for both dog and owner to go exercising. A well written little poem about Smokey. Did you mean agility classes? All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 23-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Treischel
What an exciting experience for Smokey. It's good for him, as he is smart, and good exercise too. Your poem shares his antics nicely in its free verse format.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
What an exciting experience for Smokey. It's good for him, as he is smart, and good exercise too. Your poem shares his antics nicely in its free verse format.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Domino 2
Hi, Ine.
Do you mean, 'classes', in 2nd line?
Smokey sounds like a real character, and you convey the scenes very well.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Hi, Ine.
Do you mean, 'classes', in 2nd line?
Smokey sounds like a real character, and you convey the scenes very well.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 22-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
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No probs, Ine.
You may like my latest about the evils of war.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for sharing Smokey's latest activities. I particularly liked your starting the poem with the alliteration of "s's" and your simile about his being as fast as a "greyhound". Keep enjoying the classes- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Thanks for sharing Smokey's latest activities. I particularly liked your starting the poem with the alliteration of "s's" and your simile about his being as fast as a "greyhound". Keep enjoying the classes- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
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I hope your week is productive too. Smiles- Joan
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Ine, I love this little poem. I work out at the gym three days a week and have for nearly twenty years now. I feel at 76 years of age, it is the best thing for me.
Suggestion: "started with agility classed last week." (Did you mean CLASSES?)
Very good job, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Hi, Ine, I love this little poem. I work out at the gym three days a week and have for nearly twenty years now. I feel at 76 years of age, it is the best thing for me.
Suggestion: "started with agility classed last week." (Did you mean CLASSES?)
Very good job, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week. Yes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Smokey seems to have quite a lot of fun and nailed the tests. Unfortunately you are not able to compete with Smokey because you're too old. Lol.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Smokey seems to have quite a lot of fun and nailed the tests. Unfortunately you are not able to compete with Smokey because you're too old. Lol.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a fun poem for me to read :) My dog, Lexie, has taken a few agility classes. We have loads of fun. I'm with you on feeling too old for competitions. Classes are fun, and it's great to see improvements no matter how gradual.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
This is a fun poem for me to read :) My dog, Lexie, has taken a few agility classes. We have loads of fun. I'm with you on feeling too old for competitions. Classes are fun, and it's great to see improvements no matter how gradual.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Ine. I really got a kick out of your poem about Smokey's agility training. The last line made me giggle--he's doing fine with the challenge of his training, but he won't compete because you are too old. LOL. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Hi Ine. I really got a kick out of your poem about Smokey's agility training. The last line made me giggle--he's doing fine with the challenge of his training, but he won't compete because you are too old. LOL. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Sounds like an interesting thing and something more people should do with their dogs because I know far too many people who don't train or teach their dog right or wrong. My dog was no princess but after she got a certain age I think she just gave up and did her own thing because she was old and didn't care. Dogs are pretty cool :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
Sounds like an interesting thing and something more people should do with their dogs because I know far too many people who don't train or teach their dog right or wrong. My dog was no princess but after she got a certain age I think she just gave up and did her own thing because she was old and didn't care. Dogs are pretty cool :)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from l.raven
OH Ine, this is so sweet...CONGRATULATIONS to Smokey...you must be a proud mum...LOL...I would love to see him preform...thank you for the update...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
OH Ine, this is so sweet...CONGRATULATIONS to Smokey...you must be a proud mum...LOL...I would love to see him preform...thank you for the update...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2016
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
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you are so welcome Ine...and you have a great week as well...love ya Linda xoox