Comment from Lisa Deverick

Excellent

Gotta hand it to you on the word wrongatudes... It's a Bill original! LOL Your words convey a supreme message. Our world acts like a bunch of neanderthals ..

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2016

Thank you, Lisa, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

What a wonderful phrase wrongatude. It could very well be said that one of the major problem areas that exist in the world today is directly related to wrongatudes. I don't know if you originated this term or not. Whoever did deserves a pat on the back for a job well done. Just as the writing of this great poem is deserving of praise.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

You heard it here first. I should send some of these to Webster's and get them put in the next dictionary. Thank you for the generous review. Bill

reply by nomi338 on 20-Jun-2016

Good idea, it may well be worth a try at least. The worst thing that could happen is that they might say no, but then again they might actually say yes.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned. It is so truthful. I love the art work you chose for this great piece. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2016

Thank you, Teri, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from Ginger Banks

Exceptional

So agree with this, our wrongatudes are beyond measure in this world today! It can be disheartening, but I say we all have to keep our chin up and our eyes on the One True Ruler to help us get through. This Haiku has a great message and I do like the wording. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thank you, Ginger, for the exceptional review. Bill

reply by Ginger Banks on 19-Jun-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

I like the concept. If it wasn't a haiku I would say too short and expand, but since it is, take five stars and I agree with you, by the way.I like the word wrongatudes, it is suitably expressive!

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thank you, Hayley, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from GoodHearted Woman

Excellent

Bill! This is great for a little-bitty poem. I LOVE made-up words and this is about as made-up as they get! Fanstory wants me to go on and on and on and on about these little tiny poems, so I'll just talk awhile I guess. I told you, didn't I, that my "young good-lookin' husband was a Ssgt in Viet Nam--everything at our house either has a sticker or a sign or a plaque or a calendar 15-20 ball caps with the marines on it. If you have Netflix, I think it's called The Last Bomb, taken from a soldier ON a B-29 with the old movie cameras but he does a good. I bet more will turn up as they die and others check out the back corners of closets etc. GHW
GoodHearted Woman Marcia

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2016

Thank you, Marcia, for the friendly review. I am glad your Devil Dog is Semper Fi. Your reply was very nice. I'll look up the film you mentioned. Happy day.