Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Yeah right. Unless the portions of the body only visible belong to Hannah the hag, the only road I would be hitting any time soon would be the one right there before me. Great poem.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Thank you, nomi, for looking at this. Bill

Comment from Ogden

Excellent

Clever, funny teaming of verse and illustration! (It seems to me, though, you are passing up a more attractive alternative! On second thought, my judgment is based on only a partial view...of the car, of course.)

Good luck in the contest!

Don

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Thanks, Don, for the fun review. Bill

Comment from Hayley Solomon

Excellent

haha good humour, shakes us from our expectations,
syllable count correct. Lucky it wan't an iPhone with a
syllable short, laughing

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2016

Thanks, Hayley, for the great review. Bill

reply by Hayley Solomon on 24-Jul-2016

Pleasure