Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful entry for the contest my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the picture and words. Love the scripture. Good luck in the contest. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you for your lovely review, Teresa.

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

I like your 5-7-5 poem. We all need to be reborn from all our sins. To become new in the power of God's grace. Nice poem in word and style.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you for your lovely review. Have a great weekend.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 5-7-5 poem we have to be reborn with Christ to become a new creature, and we should stay each day in His Word. An excellent choice of artwork to compliment your poem.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you for your lovely review, Sandra.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Not only did I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
Which is a perfect match
Your words captured the true meaning of a new life.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you for the review, Miss Cookie.

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Patricia, very well done 5 7 5. Perfect on the syllable coumt. I like the thought here of emerging from the dark cocoon of sinew and being a new creature in Christ

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

Thanks for the nice review, Judy.

Comment from Loren (7)

Excellent

Hooray for this gift of mercy. It is hard (next to impossible) how lucky we are to have the grace of God over our lives if we only believe and have faith in Him. Thank you for sharing this truth. Loren

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

Thank you for this great review, Loren.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Patricia,

This is another wonderful poem. You are so great at writing them and I always look forward to reading them. I wish I could write as many as you do. You are
a great poet!

Kat

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

Thank you for this great review, Kat.

reply by MizKat on 19-Aug-2016

You're welcome. Kat

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, New Creatures, takes on a spiritual aspect as the metamorphosis is compared to accepting grace and dying to old self. Nice poem.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

Thank you Bill, for this great review.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

Amen, what a transformation the Lord can make in us and you have captured it well in your words. From caterpillars that cause so much damage to beautiful butterflies - excellent writing. Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

Thank you for this great review, John.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Absolutely. A freeing metamorphosis in Christ. Nicely
expressed in your short 5-7-5. Good word choices. I
wish you much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016

Thank you Marilyn, for the nice review.