Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very funny. The raw humor is well written. The monostitchy poems are harder to do than they look, Yours is done well and the rhyme is right.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Blessings .......................Portia

Comment from maryvellef

Excellent

Ha..ha..ha. Quite funny! And very well-rhymed. I would have preferred to see it as a quatrain. And a comical picture to go along with it too!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review and I am glad you enjoyed the humor. Blessings...................Portia

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

LOL, no wonder the jackass is laughing, the question is - what were you doing behind the tree????? Like your humour, best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2016

Thanks so much for your review and I am glad you enjoyed the humor. Blessings.....................Portia