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Hell Found Me

Semi-true story

2 total reviews 
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A great story. The reason you do not have more reviews is the lack of line soacing. Many readers will open the story and leave without reading if there is no line spacing.

My first story, strangely enough, had the same name. I got no reviews until I added line spacing nothing else. When I did I won an award.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2016
    Thomas, when I copied and pasted my first chapter it did have spaces. tomorrow when post Chapter 2 will try again.
    glad you like the story.
Comment from eltwelve
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nicely written and, of course, timely for most people can relate to in-laws. yes there are good in-laws, but they are great material to use to write about. I am thinking that there were a lot of people smiling while reading.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2016


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2016
    hope you're right about the smiles. Many thanks. m-n-ls are good material. may have to explore this avenue further.