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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Midnight Chime"Love poems
11 total reviews
Comment from crowdog110
Loved this. I always thought I was a romantic, huh! I can see and feel the emotion in this piece. ...Sorry, I have been away for quite a while, dealing with loss and working in Afghanistan. Its good to get back home. I'm glad to see old friends doing well here in the forum. I'm working on getting back to putting words down myself. I can see your talent has done nothing but improve.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Loved this. I always thought I was a romantic, huh! I can see and feel the emotion in this piece. ...Sorry, I have been away for quite a while, dealing with loss and working in Afghanistan. Its good to get back home. I'm glad to see old friends doing well here in the forum. I'm working on getting back to putting words down myself. I can see your talent has done nothing but improve.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hey you welcome back!!..looking forward you reading your wonderful writings...thanks for reading mine and for the great review!!
Comment from VictoriaJoyce
How's it going? Unfortunately, as time passes on, less and less of my fanstory friends touch base. Beautifully written as always. You should consider publishing your work. CreateSpace through amazon is a good route to take, even if you just want copies for friends and family. It's a good way to go. Prayers your way. Drop me a line on my main email if you have a few moments sometime soon.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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How's it going? Unfortunately, as time passes on, less and less of my fanstory friends touch base. Beautifully written as always. You should consider publishing your work. CreateSpace through amazon is a good route to take, even if you just want copies for friends and family. It's a good way to go. Prayers your way. Drop me a line on my main email if you have a few moments sometime soon.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2017
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hey you...I'll send email soon... :-) life's been crazy
Comment from Richard J
Oh, goodness-ME, Susan!
Your mind, heart, and poetically romantic palette seem to be ever filled to overflowing.
I don't know how you do it ... make words dance and flow from page to readers' stunned and amazed imagination, pulling us so deeply, warmly, appealingly, and vividly into your moments ... whew!
One can virtually feel the wondrous lady's dreams and imaginings in your illustration, the sensual gentleness in the presentation's inferred colors ... taking on a vibrant life all its own.
Flow, rhymes, meter, metaphor, etc; each combine in a voice seldom heard with such clarity of purposeful meaning ... I love it!
Warmest hug of gratitude, Dear Susan, for sharing your ever alluring caresses of poetical bliss! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Oh, goodness-ME, Susan!
Your mind, heart, and poetically romantic palette seem to be ever filled to overflowing.
I don't know how you do it ... make words dance and flow from page to readers' stunned and amazed imagination, pulling us so deeply, warmly, appealingly, and vividly into your moments ... whew!
One can virtually feel the wondrous lady's dreams and imaginings in your illustration, the sensual gentleness in the presentation's inferred colors ... taking on a vibrant life all its own.
Flow, rhymes, meter, metaphor, etc; each combine in a voice seldom heard with such clarity of purposeful meaning ... I love it!
Warmest hug of gratitude, Dear Susan, for sharing your ever alluring caresses of poetical bliss! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 22-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2017
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Hi Richard, Thank you for this wonderful review..i really do appreciate you reading and taking the time to compose such a great review!!
Comment from Irish Rain
Another beautiful love poem, matches the picture wonderfully....'shall I seize back time, before midnight's chime'...you have such a lovely way with words!! I really enjoyed this! Blessings...
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Another beautiful love poem, matches the picture wonderfully....'shall I seize back time, before midnight's chime'...you have such a lovely way with words!! I really enjoyed this! Blessings...
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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awe thank you dear!!!
Comment from WalkerMan
Please consider this review a Virtual Six, as I am out of them for this week.
This poem is a heartfelt expression of longing to relive a lifetime of overcoming daunting obstacles until, in weariness, safety and shelter were accepted without the comfort of love except in dreams of escape to freedom with a "wondrous love" before life ends. This sad circumstance is all too common, especially for battered women. Such situations at best are difficult to remedy; and, for a variety of reasons, many never are resolved. If the dreamt lover is a real person, he faces an indefinite future of anguish and frustration unless he can settle for friendship at a distance despite secret dreams of his own, until (if ever) a change on the other side occurs in matters beyond his control. There have been other songs and poems about such circumstances, but none I have seen match the sheer openness of this one. It is an eye-mister, even in repeated readings. Superb.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Please consider this review a Virtual Six, as I am out of them for this week.
This poem is a heartfelt expression of longing to relive a lifetime of overcoming daunting obstacles until, in weariness, safety and shelter were accepted without the comfort of love except in dreams of escape to freedom with a "wondrous love" before life ends. This sad circumstance is all too common, especially for battered women. Such situations at best are difficult to remedy; and, for a variety of reasons, many never are resolved. If the dreamt lover is a real person, he faces an indefinite future of anguish and frustration unless he can settle for friendship at a distance despite secret dreams of his own, until (if ever) a change on the other side occurs in matters beyond his control. There have been other songs and poems about such circumstances, but none I have seen match the sheer openness of this one. It is an eye-mister, even in repeated readings. Superb.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Mike, wow this review!!...omgoodness...WOW
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All I can say in response to that is, you are welcome....
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, the heart you possess comes forward in these mystically wondrous words you compose with. A loving heart can only feel your thought provoking wonderments. As we negotiate the universe of moon and stars, this exceptional poem exudes many deep poignant love thoughts of someone that is part of that heart of yours. The artwork you chose brings such beauty and compliments your poem. Great rhyme scheme allows this outstanding poem to flow and to read easily. Very well done Susan and keep up your most excellent writings my good friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Susan, the heart you possess comes forward in these mystically wondrous words you compose with. A loving heart can only feel your thought provoking wonderments. As we negotiate the universe of moon and stars, this exceptional poem exudes many deep poignant love thoughts of someone that is part of that heart of yours. The artwork you chose brings such beauty and compliments your poem. Great rhyme scheme allows this outstanding poem to flow and to read easily. Very well done Susan and keep up your most excellent writings my good friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thanks jim, such a nice review..that really makes me happy
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good poem. Excellent rhyme and metering throughout.
fate deciding for you and me ...
Is fate deciding for us, or are we deciding what we call fate. It's easy to pass of a poor decision as fate.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A very good poem. Excellent rhyme and metering throughout.
fate deciding for you and me ...
Is fate deciding for us, or are we deciding what we call fate. It's easy to pass of a poor decision as fate.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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..fate....but thanks for reading and the review!!! always appreciate
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful love poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. You used great imagery and rhyme too! I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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This is a very beautiful love poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. You used great imagery and rhyme too! I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you teri!!! always appreciate you reading and the review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poem full of hope, fantasy and mystery, a romantic write with love at the heart, lovely rhymes and sentiments,love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A poem full of hope, fantasy and mystery, a romantic write with love at the heart, lovely rhymes and sentiments,love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you Dear dolly!!!!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
A very interesting style that flows so easily and the words you use are verywell chosen and used. rhyme is great and flow is perfect giving it an ease of reading
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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A very interesting style that flows so easily and the words you use are verywell chosen and used. rhyme is great and flow is perfect giving it an ease of reading
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Thank you Barb!! i do appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!