Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good 5-7-5 poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose went really well with the words. Blessings, Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you, Teri, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Interesting artwork. It looks somewhat like a diamond. I can well imagine the dynamic energy that gathers just before a massive explosion. If that happens within a human brain, I can quite well imagine the devastation that might occur.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you, nomi, for checking this out. Bill

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Bill, I feel like that often when my MS goes beserk on me. Drastic imagery, hits a powerful punch much like the synapses when on edge.
You pulled this one off perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
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 Comment Written 05-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you, Maureen, for the meaningful review. Bill

Comment from michaelcahill

Exceptional

Wow. This is amazingly thought provoking. I'm taking it as a very sensuous piece and I'm wondering how others are interpreting it. Maybe soldiers going into battle? Kind of the same thing, yes? LOL
I can't ask for anymore than to be intrigued with just a few words. Exceptional piece. mikey

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you, Miley, for the insightful and thoughtful review. Bill

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You create a feeling of tension and impending violent action in your short verse. Concise and welll chosen words crate vivid imagery, especially great pairing of "edge" and "breach". Those cells really get work out.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2017

Thank you, w.j., for giving this a look. Bill