Comment from artemis53

Excellent

LOL. You always confound me with your poetry and I feel lost in your words but they're all so lovely. It's so very nice to see you again, Michael.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Hey, hi, hello again, and welcome back! I enjoyed another example of your use of circularity and echoing sounds with "lusts" and "thrust". I particularly liked "every child's second breath" simile. Smiles and see you again soon- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

Comment from Griffinjcje

Excellent

Beautiful!!! Love your description of the desire for the rapture. You sound like you have a good relationship with Jesus...I'm working on mine. I love how you said acquired and tried on earth, makes me realize that I can acquire it too

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

Comment from RGstar

Exceptional

Now I am complete. I have spoken much about you. Thank God to see you in my mailbox, and with your name a fine write.
Gives us the melody, links us spiritually, and baptises with deep words that make much sense, if one listens.

I am so pleased I saved this six star.
Welcome back, my dear brother. I still await, Green Lake Girl and Bev, miss them much.

I thought this right kept closer to your subject matter without working too hard.
Bravo.
Feel good to see you back.
Best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017