Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Not only do I not know or understand all the forms of poetry, I am unfamiliar with most of the famous, and not so famous, poets. I guess I still have time to learn. I read your poem than your amazing notes which made me go back and re-read the poem. You are a terrific poet and while I am not qualified to critique the form, I do know what I like, and I like your style or writing. Your addition of author's notes is so informative and is slowly filling the gap in my knowledge of poets and poetry. Lovely work with this one. It flows so smoothly and creates vivid imagery as it is read.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017

You have just described my entire intention with this book. I feel like we all have our unique voice and that Poets (and all writers) have made a huge impact on society. I like to share what I've learned through the author's notes and I love to try different styles. I'm pretty much what you'd call self-taught when it comes to poetry, so emulation of the famous poets has helped me to learn the craft. I have some fantastic reviewers that steer me in the right direction. The rest is just instinct.

When it comes to reviews, poets are thrilled to hear just what you've written here. You read the poem, then the notes, then re-read the poem. You don't have to be worried about being qualified to critique the form, there are those on site that will. Your sincere reaction is priceless, in terms of us learning what appeals to the readers. I'm happy that you enjoyed this one. I chose Blake because the diversity in his style of writing reminded me of exactly what I like to do, in terms of trying new styles and emulating the masters.

Thanks for the wonderful comments.

Kim

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Quite interesting notes, and very nice tribute to William Blake. I don't believe I've ever read him. I remember Yeats, and Byron...my favorites. I read very little poetry...I need to correct that!!! Really liked this, blessings...

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017

Hi Irish,

I'm glad then, that I've had the opportunity to introduce you to William Blake. He wrote in diverse styles, that is one of the most interesting things I discovered about him. I'm spending the month exploring different poets and hoping to share them with all of my readers. I hope you'll continue to follow along. Thank you for the lovely review.

Kim

reply by Irish Rain on 06-Apr-2017

That would be a very rewarding way to write!!!

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

Poem about William Blake. Like Blake myself. The rhyme and rhythm in this poem added to readability. Word choice is also great. Love this poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017

Hi Rlegel,

I'm happy that you enjoyed this selection. I'm having a wonderful time exploring the poets. Thank you for the lovely review.

Kim

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Very powerful words written
The art work was great as well
The prey and quickness these animals
show us all is frightening they would
catch one very quickly for their feed.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017

Hi Annie,

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate you.

Kim

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Excellent

Hi Kim,

I'm not familiar with the poets and their works, so this is really informative for me.
"And what could burn brighter
than a Tyger by candlelight
as a writer
pulls all-nighter
enamored; Blake instills insight" ... love this stanza!

Thanks for sharing your knowledge and Blake's poem with us.

Great work, Kim!

Connie

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017

Hi Connie,

I'm happy that you enjoyed this one. I know that I read the Tyger poem a long time ago. He has one about a Lamb, too. He was a really versatile poet. He's the one that got me going on the epigrams, too. I read one of his yesterday and just decided I wasn't done with him yet lol Thanks for the fantastic review.

Kim

reply by bichonfrisegirl on 03-Apr-2017

My pleasure, Kim!

Comment from alf collier

Excellent

A very adept entry into your poetry theme for the book!! I am not well versed in the classic writers, poetry was of no interest to me until almost three years ago, and I profess to be self taught with major assistance from poets I admire. Please forgive the lack of critique, but I do love this piece!!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017

Hi Alf,

Telling me what you like about a poem or what moves you is critique enough. I appreciate knowing that it struck a chord for you and that you enjoyed reading. I'm pretty much self taught, too. I just love to read and emulate. I've learned a lot from others here on Fan Story. Thanks for the wonderful review.

Kim

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

What a wonderful tribute, in a similar form. Well done! Eloquent and unique. Superbly rhymed. Well presented too.

Favorite line:

His wit -- a madman's prodigy.


Good flow. However, I have some optional suggestions for smoother enjambment:


In an epigram(;)
his catalogued apology;

And what could burn brighter
than a Tyger by candlelight,(NO COMMA)
as a writer


*
Ink left for all posterity,(;)
allay(s) your fear,
may shed a tear,(--)
his work brought me such clarity.


What great rhymes, dear. Bravo!


Love,
rd

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017

Hi rd,

I always love to read your reviews. Thank you for all of your (optional) suggestions. I've edited and employed them all. Where would I be without you?

*Hugs*

Kim

reply by rama devi on 04-Apr-2017

Thanks for your gracious response and kind words, dear Kim. Warm hugs, rd

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

Thank you for your excellent note explaining what is transpiring here. It leaves me with one query. You have faithfully followed Blake's syllable count in all but the first lines to his stanzas which, in the original run 6 - 5 - 6 - 5, while yours run 5 -5 - 5 - 6 thus setting a different rhythmic pattern to the whole. It would not be hard to emulate the original precisely. Might I suggest:

S1. Who is [this] Blake to Thee?
S3.And what [could] burn(s) brighter
S4.His voice we ('re meant to) must hear!

Just a thought.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017

Hi Pantygynt:

Your thoughts are always good ones :) How could I not employ that suggestion? Thanks for always taking time to help me improve my writing. I appreciate your dedicated reviewing and you.

Kim

reply by Pantygynt on 03-Apr-2017

You're welcome. In August I shall be running a class on Parody. If you are interested.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem to honor the poet William Blake. I haven't hear of him before as far as my knowledge or memory allows me. Many poets write poems through the night when all is quiet.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017

Hi Sandra,

I can write all night long if I'm undisturbed. My husband tells me I should try going to bed sometimes lol Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. I'm happy you enjoyed this one.

Kim

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Nicely written Kim your tribute poem to Blake, obviously a favourite of yours. You are bent on educating us once again, I don't know how you find the time to research, write review. (Tired thinking of it)LOL
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017

Hi Valda,

When I find interesting bits I like to share lol I'm glad you all indulge me and enjoy the author's notes. Thanks for the great comments.

Kim