Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very interesting 7x7 poem you have penned about football. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Of course this is just my thinking, but could it be that you might have watched a couple movies more than maybe you should have? Like me, you show a decided bent, slightly off kilter sensibility. I really like and admire that.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Thank you, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

You are definitely one of the more prolific poets we have on this site.
This is another fine example of your skill.
Terrific imagery and and excellent pace.
Fantastic writing!
Michael

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017

Thank you, Michael, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this whimsical tale of Wilson, the soccer ball. You were able to tell the story from the ball's point of view, and make it clear within the lines of the poem. A suggestion; change the color of your font OR the background. It is a bit difficult to read right now,
~patty~

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017

I see that now. I darkened the background. TY.