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Comment from
nomi338
That is some killer stuff. It is so powerful, it literally takes off the top of my head. This is one of the best highs I have ever known or experienced. I am actually seeing things that are out of this world or at least the world that I'm used to. Give me another hit, I want to see and feel more.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
This was your review on drugs.
Comment from
PoemsOfDD
Bill, this is a fun little ditty of a poem for Easter. I like the mix of donuts, eggs and diamonds - interesting mix but nothing is strange nowadays, it can work. I particularly like the last line :-)
Just a comment on this line however:
"we're be safe until tomorrow--"
Do you mean - 'we'll we safe until tomorrow'?
Thanks for this lighthearted read and Happy Easter to you. ~DD
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Thank you, DD, for the help. Bill
Comment from
Mustang Patty
Your story of mixtures, concoctions and intrigue has me hungry and curious. You wove a tale within the lines of this poem that has me a bit confused, but I liked the rhyme and rhythm.
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Thanks, Patty. Nonsense is confusing.
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