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Comment from Joan E.
Welcome back--I was off for the holiday weekend and am desperately trying to catch up and am glad I found your poem. I relished the notion of angel wings growing larger and enjoyed your modified circularity. Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Welcome back--I was off for the holiday weekend and am desperately trying to catch up and am glad I found your poem. I relished the notion of angel wings growing larger and enjoyed your modified circularity. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Hi J...-smile-
well you know I feel about you speeding...Docs says the body cast comes off next week. were all excited and...quite frighted of screeching tires, exploding glass and loud noises that sound like crash...yes yes by all means slow down before you kill me. what kind engine you got in that thing anyway...rocket science...? love ya Michael
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Thanks again for making me smile with your special sense of humor. Big hugs- Joan
Comment from Badger_29
A Wonderful example of free-verse. You have expertly woven this excellent writing with a number of philosophical and spiritual questions and queries. Very thought provoking.
I really enjoyed how you put, fly high ABOVE past wreckage, indicating that we not only overcome obstacles, but learn and grow, and gain a better perspective of the "bigger" picture
Blessings, and
Happy Easter
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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A Wonderful example of free-verse. You have expertly woven this excellent writing with a number of philosophical and spiritual questions and queries. Very thought provoking.
I really enjoyed how you put, fly high ABOVE past wreckage, indicating that we not only overcome obstacles, but learn and grow, and gain a better perspective of the "bigger" picture
Blessings, and
Happy Easter
Brother Badger
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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yes...my guess. I never put a lot of thought into what i'll write. I just finds a song or it finds me in my moment or moments before...and go from right there and now. I suppose subconsciously it came from a recent conversation with someone who encourages forgiveness. Thank you Badger for the blessing. love Michael
Comment from sheena121
A charming poem, I assume it to be about a test of one's faith, well written and good choice of words has good flow to it. Well done
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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A charming poem, I assume it to be about a test of one's faith, well written and good choice of words has good flow to it. Well done
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2017
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hm...I think each reasons need unique...but each find same reason to stay alive in love