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Comment from Ronni
Wow...
As a firm believer in the 'serendipity' fate and effect, I totally adored this
love poem! Such vivid imagery casting immediate sensations of bliss...
in your 3rd phrase so beguilingly conveys onset of such euphoria and
ecstasy between these two lovers... the total eclipse of love and passions
in 4th phrase...and perfectly divine ending...a most magnificently magical
and enthralling poem indeed. Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Wow...
As a firm believer in the 'serendipity' fate and effect, I totally adored this
love poem! Such vivid imagery casting immediate sensations of bliss...
in your 3rd phrase so beguilingly conveys onset of such euphoria and
ecstasy between these two lovers... the total eclipse of love and passions
in 4th phrase...and perfectly divine ending...a most magnificently magical
and enthralling poem indeed. Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 04-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Thank you Ronni! I am happy you enjoyed this poem!...Thanks for reading and the the awesome review.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the image and presentation.
-A nicely penned love poem, Susan.
-An interesting style with repetition of
lines and rhymes.
-The progression of ideas is good, too.
-In the end it
"'Twas serendipity that fateful night"
-One small thing with "kisses soon imparts" [kisses impart]
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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-I like the image and presentation.
-A nicely penned love poem, Susan.
-An interesting style with repetition of
lines and rhymes.
-The progression of ideas is good, too.
-In the end it
"'Twas serendipity that fateful night"
-One small thing with "kisses soon imparts" [kisses impart]
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Thank you dear for the correction!!!..Glad you enjoyed this poem....thanks for reading! :-)
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You are welcome, Susan. I did enjoy the poem.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem in your signature love poem series
Looks like a well executed Villanelle
with excellent rhymes and repeat lines
"'twas serendipity that fateful night"
isn't it wonderful what can happen under moonlight
Great matching art work and presentation
Very nicely done
RS
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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This is an excellent poem in your signature love poem series
Looks like a well executed Villanelle
with excellent rhymes and repeat lines
"'twas serendipity that fateful night"
isn't it wonderful what can happen under moonlight
Great matching art work and presentation
Very nicely done
RS
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Thank you for reading and for the review!!! I sure do appreciate it!!
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Susan, first of all your choice of artwork lends poignancy of the your outstanding words of this truly outstanding poem. I can feel the love eminating from each line, each word of your poem. l truly enjoy this poem and all that you have composed. Truly a great composition worthy of more than six stars. Congratulations my friend on this love poem. This would be an incredible entry in the love poem contest. Keep writing in these types of poetry and great things may be heading in your future. Always a pleasure my friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
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Susan, first of all your choice of artwork lends poignancy of the your outstanding words of this truly outstanding poem. I can feel the love eminating from each line, each word of your poem. l truly enjoy this poem and all that you have composed. Truly a great composition worthy of more than six stars. Congratulations my friend on this love poem. This would be an incredible entry in the love poem contest. Keep writing in these types of poetry and great things may be heading in your future. Always a pleasure my friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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6? thanks jim!...didnt even think about the contest..lol forgot about contest..thanks for reading and for the great review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Resisting never, strong arms holding tight,
we're joy's kaleidoscope, with fading lyarts ...
love harnessed, two souls cradled 'neath moonlight.
True bonded dovetails under heaven's sight ...
gone, empty yesterdays; now, living starts.
'Twas serendipity that fateful night;
love harnessed, two souls cradled 'neath moonlight.
Such stunning work, amazing, well done, this is spellbinding kindest regards Meia
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Resisting never, strong arms holding tight,
we're joy's kaleidoscope, with fading lyarts ...
love harnessed, two souls cradled 'neath moonlight.
True bonded dovetails under heaven's sight ...
gone, empty yesterdays; now, living starts.
'Twas serendipity that fateful night;
love harnessed, two souls cradled 'neath moonlight.
Such stunning work, amazing, well done, this is spellbinding kindest regards Meia
Comment Written 03-May-2017
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Meia!!! Hi! thanks so much for reading and for the review!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful stylish write with attractive language throughout and a joy to read. I especially loved the last line "love harnessed, two souls cradled 'neath moonlight', perfect! Love Dolly x
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A beautiful stylish write with attractive language throughout and a joy to read. I especially loved the last line "love harnessed, two souls cradled 'neath moonlight', perfect! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Aw Thank you for reading and for the awesome review! I do appreciate it!
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This was absolutely delightful, a beautiful love poem that flows wonderfully well and such fantastic lines within.
I particularly enjoyed the last stanza
Have a lovely day
Mitchell
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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This was absolutely delightful, a beautiful love poem that flows wonderfully well and such fantastic lines within.
I particularly enjoyed the last stanza
Have a lovely day
Mitchell
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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:-) Thank you so much!!! I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!!!
Comment from Selina Stambi
'Twas serendipity that fateful night;.. gorgeous opening line. Be still my heart!
Excellent rhyme/ near rhyme and meter.
Lovely poem, Susan.
Sonali
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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'Twas serendipity that fateful night;.. gorgeous opening line. Be still my heart!
Excellent rhyme/ near rhyme and meter.
Lovely poem, Susan.
Sonali
Comment Written 02-May-2017
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awww happy you enjoyed this!!!! thanks for reading and for the awesome review!!!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent poem and a great picture. You should have entered this in the love song contest. I think it would have won. It paints a beautiful picture.
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An excellent poem and a great picture. You should have entered this in the love song contest. I think it would have won. It paints a beautiful picture.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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You are sweet!..Thanks for reading and for the wonderful comments! I do appreciate it! :-)I
Comment from Hansel1
Such a heartfelt romance portrayed. Love is said to be blind, but we see so clearly the magic that draws us to it. To experience something so magnetizing can almost take your breath away, even if only for a night.
While I am of the persuasion that love is highly over-romanticized in the public eye, I am also the first to admit that when the mood strikes and winds align, there is no greater place to reside than foolishly in love.
Thank you for sharing your work; my glasses have blushed slightly rosier because of it - Cheers!
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Such a heartfelt romance portrayed. Love is said to be blind, but we see so clearly the magic that draws us to it. To experience something so magnetizing can almost take your breath away, even if only for a night.
While I am of the persuasion that love is highly over-romanticized in the public eye, I am also the first to admit that when the mood strikes and winds align, there is no greater place to reside than foolishly in love.
Thank you for sharing your work; my glasses have blushed slightly rosier because of it - Cheers!
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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I love this review!!! I think it's better then the poem!!!!....I'm happy you enjoyed this...thanks for reading and for the wonderful review!!