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Comment from frogbook
You are too much, my friend. This is another great in the Shakspoonian tradition. Love the picture and could never have said it better.
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
You are too much, my friend. This is another great in the Shakspoonian tradition. Love the picture and could never have said it better.
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thanks, FB
Comment from Poetic Friend
Bill,
This poem makes the reader wonders which came first the artwork or the poem. The artwork and poem complement each other.
This poem is so cleverly done. You personified utensils with uniqueness. I LOVE when poets take inanimate objects and give them lives. You did such, my friend. Bravo!
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
Bill,
This poem makes the reader wonders which came first the artwork or the poem. The artwork and poem complement each other.
This poem is so cleverly done. You personified utensils with uniqueness. I LOVE when poets take inanimate objects and give them lives. You did such, my friend. Bravo!
Comment Written 30-May-2017
reply by the author on 30-May-2017
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Thanks, PF
Comment from nomi338
This relationship is doomed as Knifer is secretly planning to come between the two lovers and when Spoono is least expectant, Knifer plans to stab him in the back. Watch your back Spoono! Knifer wants your girl.
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
This relationship is doomed as Knifer is secretly planning to come between the two lovers and when Spoono is least expectant, Knifer plans to stab him in the back. Watch your back Spoono! Knifer wants your girl.
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Truth be told, Knifer did threaten Spoono, so he ran away with a dish.
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Ahaha, Of course. I should have known that.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute Pranka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, TEeri
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
This is a very cute Pranka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, TEeri
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Margaret Ford
Ha! What a lovely bit of nonsense this is: a Shakespearean tragedy amongst kitchen utensils. Bill, I have to admit that I love this little poem; you made me smile, and that isn't easy this time of night. A million thanks -- Margaret
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
Ha! What a lovely bit of nonsense this is: a Shakespearean tragedy amongst kitchen utensils. Bill, I have to admit that I love this little poem; you made me smile, and that isn't easy this time of night. A million thanks -- Margaret
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thanks, Margaret
Comment from Ricky1024
This was written in farse or prank.
A Prank seems to me as a wasted place for any good script writer to place their thoughts.
Just a thought.
I think haiku also are a waste.
Too short and no meaning.
I will take a good children's fairytale or a serious poem over that.
Ricky1024.
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
This was written in farse or prank.
A Prank seems to me as a wasted place for any good script writer to place their thoughts.
Just a thought.
I think haiku also are a waste.
Too short and no meaning.
I will take a good children's fairytale or a serious poem over that.
Ricky1024.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thanks, Ricky