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Comment from nomi338
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Wait ... what? Is that meat? If so what kind of meat? Why is it labeled and hanging like that? Is this guy some kind of butcher, hunter or what? Urp, I think I'm going to be sick.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2017
    Check the label for contents.
Comment from Kerry Foley
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lol, funny, Although I would never think of double crossing a pig or cow, heh-heh. Great job on the poem.
Could be like Sweeny Todd-lol ~Kerry

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    This is why we don't guestion what is in sausage.
reply by Kerry Foley on 17-Jun-2017
    lol :)
Comment from tfawcus
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Double crossing the sausage maker sounds like a dangerous occupation. If roused to anger, it seems that he does not mince his words! Of all the sausages on the hooks, you could be the wurst!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


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    Most people believe the story is baloney.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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hmmm. Do you speak of the sausage maker? The photo you've included leads me to believe this - or perhaps we are dealing with someone bigger - like God. I know we are always on His mind.

Thank you for this thought provoking piece,

~patty~

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    The Lord of the manor is the Lord of the universe.