Don't Let My Dog Be Left Behind
Without Bud, we'll lighten our load.62 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Sis Cat
I wish you the very best with your entry and
sharing your caring true story
In A Poem contest
Glad that crowd of one hundred teenagers cheered, laughed, and chanted at unexpected places, and you rolled with them.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Smiles Sis Cat
I wish you the very best with your entry and
sharing your caring true story
In A Poem contest
Glad that crowd of one hundred teenagers cheered, laughed, and chanted at unexpected places, and you rolled with them.
Gert
Comment Written 22-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Gert, for your glorious, generous review. I had a lot of fun performing my story in a poem for teens. Thanks also for wishing me the very best with my entry.
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You are welcome Sis Cat
Comment from smileycloud
good fun poem
it is full of good characterization
a fast paced bubbly piece of work
good work
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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good fun poem
it is full of good characterization
a fast paced bubbly piece of work
good work
have a smiley day
Comment Written 18-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Yes, Smiley, I am surprised how fast paced this is. It runs under two minutes when I perform it, yet I filled it with action and characterization. Thank you for giving my dong its sixty-first and last review before my promotion expired.
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh no no no no no....ha ha. No way could I let anybodies, or my own 'Buddy' be left behind!! Good for Buddy!! Would break my heart, to break an animals heart....no no no no no!! Glad you saved him!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Oh no no no no no....ha ha. No way could I let anybodies, or my own 'Buddy' be left behind!! Good for Buddy!! Would break my heart, to break an animals heart....no no no no no!! Glad you saved him!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Oh, thank you, Irish Rain, for your glorious review. It cheers me. Rolf! Rolf!
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Ha ha...you are most welcome!!!
Comment from Mimi Linny
What adorable lyrics for a cute little children's song! Great idea to have this put to music. I'm sure you probably have a tune in mind and I'm sure it's a perfect match for the lyrics! Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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What adorable lyrics for a cute little children's song! Great idea to have this put to music. I'm sure you probably have a tune in mind and I'm sure it's a perfect match for the lyrics! Great job!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Oh, thank you, Mimi Linny, for your encouraging review. I look forward to performing this in front of 100 kids and teens Thursday.
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You're welcome! Have fun on Thursday!
Comment from teols2016
Yes, don't leave Bud behind. You went above and beyond with this writing prompt. A gold medal winner in my book. Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Yes, don't leave Bud behind. You went above and beyond with this writing prompt. A gold medal winner in my book. Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Yes, teols2016, I performed it before my songwriting teacher tonight and he was impressed how I combined spoken word, poetry, song, and acting. It was the most different "song" performed during songwriting finals, so different that my teacher would not call it a song but a multidimensional performance. I look forward to performing it again and again.
Thank you for calling this a gold medal winner and for wishing me good luck.
Comment from gramalot8
Hi. This was certainly a fun poem to read. We have 4 dogs and a kitty.... so definitely I can relate to your love of your doggy. There is no way we'd leave any of them behind if at all possible. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest. Gramalot8
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Hi. This was certainly a fun poem to read. We have 4 dogs and a kitty.... so definitely I can relate to your love of your doggy. There is no way we'd leave any of them behind if at all possible. Thanks for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest. Gramalot8
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Oh, thank you, Gramalot8, for your review. I am not even waiting for the February results of this contest, but am taking my song on the road to perform at open mics from San Francisco to Las Vegas and beyond. Thanks for wishing me good luck.
Comment from godlucifer
the road is a deserted road,especially if buddy is left behind. the storytelling was fun,entertaining,and of interest to the reader. your poem was special and it was a gift to read it. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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the road is a deserted road,especially if buddy is left behind. the storytelling was fun,entertaining,and of interest to the reader. your poem was special and it was a gift to read it. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you, godlucifer, for your cheering review of my fun tale. I had a great time writing and sharing my story.
Comment from Lulube
Quite humorous and great story line. Reading your notes I now understand the go go go parts better. lol You can never leave your dog or cat or anyone, behind. good thing they hadn't driven too far. run Buddy run
lulube
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Quite humorous and great story line. Reading your notes I now understand the go go go parts better. lol You can never leave your dog or cat or anyone, behind. good thing they hadn't driven too far. run Buddy run
lulube
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you, lulube, for your cheering review. Yes, reviewers of my writing song and audiences of my performed song found this story line quite humorous. California news are filled with reports of happy reunions of dogs and cats reunited with their owners after the evacuations due to the wild fires.
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REunited, now that's a heart warmer. I couldn't imagine being separated from my Mosey. Gut wrenching thoughts.
lulube
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Andre;
Thank you for sharing this last assignment for your class with us. You've certainly given us a story within the lines of the poem, and I hope your entry does well.
I was despondent when the dog was left behind,
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Hi, Andre;
Thank you for sharing this last assignment for your class with us. You've certainly given us a story within the lines of the poem, and I hope your entry does well.
I was despondent when the dog was left behind,
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Oh, thank you, Patty, for your review and for wishing me well in the contest. I love creating this story and even more performing it. Coworkers and clients got a hoot out of rehearsal before tonight's class.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This was a delight Andre, excellent lyrics and such a unique, calming subject, very well done my friend, I think you have excelled here.......
Mitchell
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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This was a delight Andre, excellent lyrics and such a unique, calming subject, very well done my friend, I think you have excelled here.......
Mitchell
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell, for your review and for saying my lyrics excelled at this assignment.