All Hallows Eve
Halloween Poetry Contest Submission41 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is a wonderful entry for the Halloween contest. It really captures the scariness of the holiday, and used very descriptive words to convey that. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a wonderful entry for the Halloween contest. It really captures the scariness of the holiday, and used very descriptive words to convey that. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Well, readers cannot say that they have not been warned! I like the unusual rhyme scheme where two final lines of each stanza rhymes, while the first two lines are random. A sort of dreaded truth shines through the allegorical picture painted.
Warmly,
Juliette
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Well, readers cannot say that they have not been warned! I like the unusual rhyme scheme where two final lines of each stanza rhymes, while the first two lines are random. A sort of dreaded truth shines through the allegorical picture painted.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
interesting rhyming scheme you've employed here with the internal in the first two lines and the couplets in the third and fourth of each verse. Works very well indeed - is there a specific name for this?
Very nice presentation of the piece too.
Good form and flow throughout.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
interesting rhyming scheme you've employed here with the internal in the first two lines and the couplets in the third and fourth of each verse. Works very well indeed - is there a specific name for this?
Very nice presentation of the piece too.
Good form and flow throughout.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from crybry67
I really enjoyed reading your Halloween poem. I liked your vivid imagery, your rhyme scheme and perfect meter...great presentation as well. Blessings...Christy
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I really enjoyed reading your Halloween poem. I liked your vivid imagery, your rhyme scheme and perfect meter...great presentation as well. Blessings...Christy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2017
Comment from DonandVicki
A very original and well-versed Halloween poem. The artwork that you chose to complement your spooky poetic verse is well chosen. A very good submission for the contest.
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A very original and well-versed Halloween poem. The artwork that you chose to complement your spooky poetic verse is well chosen. A very good submission for the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS for you, dear poet. There's no need in me even entering this contest since I've read your delightfully scary scenarios. Whoa, that photo is simply horrifying and scary. The background fonts and colors go so well with Halloween colors. This poem has scared me and made me scared to open my door at Halloween and I'm not going to any stores at night on Halloween, because that's when robbers have excuses to wear masks and hold up stores, etc. MARVELOUS! lol liberty justice
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SIX STARS for you, dear poet. There's no need in me even entering this contest since I've read your delightfully scary scenarios. Whoa, that photo is simply horrifying and scary. The background fonts and colors go so well with Halloween colors. This poem has scared me and made me scared to open my door at Halloween and I'm not going to any stores at night on Halloween, because that's when robbers have excuses to wear masks and hold up stores, etc. MARVELOUS! lol liberty justice
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from simon de buisseret
Well. That's done it. I can't go out at night for a while! A great poem carefully done and with a spooky picture, too. I also like the use of little used adjectives like 'stygian'. Very good, thanks.
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Well. That's done it. I can't go out at night for a while! A great poem carefully done and with a spooky picture, too. I also like the use of little used adjectives like 'stygian'. Very good, thanks.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from DALLAS01
This certainly deserves all time best. Scared the bejesus out of me. Great combo of background and font color. I loved the rhyme scheme of inner rhyme and line rhyme. It had a great cadence.
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This certainly deserves all time best. Scared the bejesus out of me. Great combo of background and font color. I loved the rhyme scheme of inner rhyme and line rhyme. It had a great cadence.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Kerry Foley
OOoooo, this is an awesome Halloween poem, my friend, I love it. Very chilling and spooky, great picture to go with it. Good luck. ~Kerry
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OOoooo, this is an awesome Halloween poem, my friend, I love it. Very chilling and spooky, great picture to go with it. Good luck. ~Kerry
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017
Comment from Heather Knight
Even though I cannot write poetry (apart from free verse), I admire those that can.
I like your poem very much: when read aloud the rhythm and rhyme are great.
Thanks for sharing and scaring.
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Even though I cannot write poetry (apart from free verse), I admire those that can.
I like your poem very much: when read aloud the rhythm and rhyme are great.
Thanks for sharing and scaring.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2017