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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Again!"Love poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Well indeed Susan...
No doubt this erotic love feast and fury, with every sensuous fiber in their
bodies, yearning and glowing, effects a molten scene as if their bodies were
an instrument in full crescendo and ecstasy, pulsating centers of power and
desire simultaneously captured, as love's hypnotic incense continues to find
her but commanding more and more! (Whew...even the screen is sweating..LOL)
A truly fantastic love, erotica poem discreetly penned in stunning poetic mastery
and mystique! Awesome read...by awesome poet! Thanks for sharing!
Best wishes always, Ronni
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Well indeed Susan...
No doubt this erotic love feast and fury, with every sensuous fiber in their
bodies, yearning and glowing, effects a molten scene as if their bodies were
an instrument in full crescendo and ecstasy, pulsating centers of power and
desire simultaneously captured, as love's hypnotic incense continues to find
her but commanding more and more! (Whew...even the screen is sweating..LOL)
A truly fantastic love, erotica poem discreetly penned in stunning poetic mastery
and mystique! Awesome read...by awesome poet! Thanks for sharing!
Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Ronni! This is an outstanding review! heck it's better then the poem! Thank you for taking the time to read and write such a wonderful review. I am smiling! :-) and 6 stars!!! :-))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Comment from RGstar
I had a chance to look through. This was absolutely beautiful, clean, yet warm. Passionate and at the same time erotic.
Beautiful wording that have a certain sensuality. Then the key...Again.
Well done.
My best wishes, and congratulations.
RG
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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I had a chance to look through. This was absolutely beautiful, clean, yet warm. Passionate and at the same time erotic.
Beautiful wording that have a certain sensuality. Then the key...Again.
Well done.
My best wishes, and congratulations.
RG
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
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Oh you sweetie! thank you for such a kind review that left a great big smile on my face!!!
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You were worth, author. Beautifully done.
Comment from DR DIP
Wow! how did I miss this Susan? that is so erotic and sensual It hardened the cockles of my heart! you sure no how to write an erotic sensual poem Susan a worthy winner
dip
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Wow! how did I miss this Susan? that is so erotic and sensual It hardened the cockles of my heart! you sure no how to write an erotic sensual poem Susan a worthy winner
dip
Comment Written 04-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2017
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Hugs hugs hugs!.Is that heart of yours all warmed and softened up again? Thanks for the sweet review Dipster. I ALWAYS love hearing from my friend. :-)
Comment from WalkerMan
Congratulations, Susan, for sharing First Place with such worthy competition from kiwigirl2821 with this superb entry that only you, as the Queen of Discreet Heat, could have written. This delightfully passionate poem builds and builds to its peak, just as real loving should, takes a few moments to savor its high plateau of ecstasy, then resumes the climb! That joyous "Again!" earns the extra star, as any partner's glowing embers would burst back into roaring flame at such a request....
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Congratulations, Susan, for sharing First Place with such worthy competition from kiwigirl2821 with this superb entry that only you, as the Queen of Discreet Heat, could have written. This delightfully passionate poem builds and builds to its peak, just as real loving should, takes a few moments to savor its high plateau of ecstasy, then resumes the climb! That joyous "Again!" earns the extra star, as any partner's glowing embers would burst back into roaring flame at such a request....
Comment Written 30-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2017
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Thank you Mike for this exceptional review! I always appreciate your take on my poetry....you always get it. :-)
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You are most welcome, Susan. The centered short lines with lots of blank space on both sides actually add to the passionate effect, as they suggest ignoring the rest of the world while busily focused on each other. -- Mike
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is very erotic and sensual without needing a warning. Thank you for entering my contest. You a written a great entry for it!
teresa
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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This is very erotic and sensual without needing a warning. Thank you for entering my contest. You a written a great entry for it!
teresa
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Well thank you very much! :-)))
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello you oooooolalalalalala poet lol. I gotta say though, my vocabulary must not be as strong as others cause I lost the plot on some of the thoughts as the words got in the way. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Hello you oooooolalalalalala poet lol. I gotta say though, my vocabulary must not be as strong as others cause I lost the plot on some of the thoughts as the words got in the way. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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:-)...yes, my vocab...can get carried away...but i like the reader to imagine to words too. Thank you for the super sweet review! I appreciate you taking the time to read!! have a great day!
Comment from Bliss A
Nicely done. It subtle and yet arousing. I love the innuendos used, the picture painted in my mind is of an enormous appetite for this person and you want more and more of that someone. Great piece
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Nicely done. It subtle and yet arousing. I love the innuendos used, the picture painted in my mind is of an enormous appetite for this person and you want more and more of that someone. Great piece
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Well thank you very much for this wonderful review! I tend to write with a (picture in mind) instead of more...hmmm vivid wording? lol...thank you again for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it. Have a wonderful day :-)))
Comment from oliver818
Wow that's beautiful and evocative. I love the title of this competition, "Erotic poem(clean)", and I think you nailed it just right with this piece. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Wow that's beautiful and evocative. I love the title of this competition, "Erotic poem(clean)", and I think you nailed it just right with this piece. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2017
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Oh thank you so much! I was a little worried....might be too much for some, but the contest did say erotic!. :-)))..Thank you for taking the time to read and review! I do appreciate it! Have a wonderful day. :-)