Perennials of War
Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Chapter Neunzehn part eins"Is Anderson a gallant knight? Can he recover Shan
27 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
I can only assume she had a nightmare about the day's events...I know I would. I enjoyed learning about Anderson's history. Oh, to know a generous billionaire, how nice that would be.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I can only assume she had a nightmare about the day's events...I know I would. I enjoyed learning about Anderson's history. Oh, to know a generous billionaire, how nice that would be.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I agree. I think we should clone him. LOL Thank you.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I've been enjoying this. The continuing saga is getting better all the time. Thank you for sharing this. This is very intriguing and very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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I've been enjoying this. The continuing saga is getting better all the time. Thank you for sharing this. This is very intriguing and very well done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Shelton
Wow! I am hooked! This was a very good read!
I am eager for the next chapter.
I enjoy the interaction between Anderson and Shana.
I am really wondering what made her scream!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Wow! I am hooked! This was a very good read!
I am eager for the next chapter.
I enjoy the interaction between Anderson and Shana.
I am really wondering what made her scream!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
Your dialogue gives the reader lots of good information on Anderson, which is a good time in the story for some additional backstory. He (Anderson) is full of surprises, and reveals himself to be a capable man in lots of ways. The chapter's ending makes me want to read more!
:) Bev
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Your dialogue gives the reader lots of good information on Anderson, which is a good time in the story for some additional backstory. He (Anderson) is full of surprises, and reveals himself to be a capable man in lots of ways. The chapter's ending makes me want to read more!
:) Bev
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I so enjoy you being back.
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Thanks so much, Barbara. I'm really glad to back too!
Hugs, Bev
Comment from robina1978
I was afraid with the photo you were going to write about food, but I should have known better. Thanks for the introduction, really needed by me. I must have missed a lot. This is an interesting chapter were Shana likes to hear more about Drew's background. He tells her. It gives her a nightmare, because of all the weapons.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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I was afraid with the photo you were going to write about food, but I should have known better. Thanks for the introduction, really needed by me. I must have missed a lot. This is an interesting chapter were Shana likes to hear more about Drew's background. He tells her. It gives her a nightmare, because of all the weapons.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. LOL
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
and onto the rented condo. (on to)
This is a well written chapter, and you've made me hungry, too. Again, I am totally lost in knowing what has occurred prior to this, but enjoyed it anyway~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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and onto the rented condo. (on to)
This is a well written chapter, and you've made me hungry, too. Again, I am totally lost in knowing what has occurred prior to this, but enjoyed it anyway~Debbie
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter reveal farmer was well written rich and teams all imagery I'm particularly like the ending very wonderful the last chapter of this many of the top part of this chapter thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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This chapter reveal farmer was well written rich and teams all imagery I'm particularly like the ending very wonderful the last chapter of this many of the top part of this chapter thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacques Wolfguard
I thought that this part of the chapter was very well done. I especially enjoyed how certain descriptions, and specific ways in which words were presented within the dialogue helped to flush out the characters-especially to those of us whom are jumping in the middle of the story.
I have no comments to add yet. I will wait until I have read more of the chapters, so as to sketch out the themes and other aspects of the book in their entirety before I comment on just one chapter, (Especially since I have not read the other chapters before this particular one).
However, from what I have read here it reads well, and the characters are starting to be flushed out a little bit. Great Work.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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I thought that this part of the chapter was very well done. I especially enjoyed how certain descriptions, and specific ways in which words were presented within the dialogue helped to flush out the characters-especially to those of us whom are jumping in the middle of the story.
I have no comments to add yet. I will wait until I have read more of the chapters, so as to sketch out the themes and other aspects of the book in their entirety before I comment on just one chapter, (Especially since I have not read the other chapters before this particular one).
However, from what I have read here it reads well, and the characters are starting to be flushed out a little bit. Great Work.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Barbara, :)
Good chapter. It was nice to learn about Anderson.
I found some typos and have a suggestion:
My parents didn't want spoilt (spoiled?) children." "You're tracking. He manages the production part and I take care of the finances and legislative part. (I suggest a break between the sentences or a new paragraph.)"
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Hello, Barbara, :)
Good chapter. It was nice to learn about Anderson.
I found some typos and have a suggestion:
My parents didn't want spoilt (spoiled?) children." "You're tracking. He manages the production part and I take care of the finances and legislative part. (I suggest a break between the sentences or a new paragraph.)"
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I'll check those areas
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this is a great chapter and I just wonder why Shana has such bad nightmare. I'm glad Anderson is there for her.
"I understand, but you've accidentally stepped in the world of the Russian mafia.= , but you've accidentally stepped into the world ...
Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Hi Barbara, this is a great chapter and I just wonder why Shana has such bad nightmare. I'm glad Anderson is there for her.
"I understand, but you've accidentally stepped in the world of the Russian mafia.= , but you've accidentally stepped into the world ...
Looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.