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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Lush Sultry Night"Love poems
8 total reviews
Comment from Richard J
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous, Susan ... wow!
Perfect everything in this wonderful Pantoum, and they are not all that easy to compose, either.
What a smooooth flow, and imagery that virtually embraces and sweeps the senses away, syntax scribed from a golden pen ~ no doubt you're going to win*
Font choice and color - perfecto, and dynamite pic, too ... woohoo!
I love it mucho, Dear Poetess ... now, for a bucket of cold water! ~ Richard ; )
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous, Susan ... wow!
Perfect everything in this wonderful Pantoum, and they are not all that easy to compose, either.
What a smooooth flow, and imagery that virtually embraces and sweeps the senses away, syntax scribed from a golden pen ~ no doubt you're going to win*
Font choice and color - perfecto, and dynamite pic, too ... woohoo!
I love it mucho, Dear Poetess ... now, for a bucket of cold water! ~ Richard ; )
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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:-) Thank you Richard for introducing me to this form!.. win or not, just happy you enjoyed this little piece. :-)
Comment from Bill Schott
This pantoum, Lush Sultry Night, has the right format and brings to life the sweaty, passionate lovemaking that keeps the world spinning and wanting to.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This pantoum, Lush Sultry Night, has the right format and brings to life the sweaty, passionate lovemaking that keeps the world spinning and wanting to.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks Bill for the review!..I was just introduced to this form...I Like it! :-)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written rhyming poem with very good descriptive wording. It makes me think of me and my husband when we first got married. On Valentines Day it will be 31 years we will have been married! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written rhyming poem with very good descriptive wording. It makes me think of me and my husband when we first got married. On Valentines Day it will be 31 years we will have been married! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Thanks Teri!! always love your reviews :-)
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Rhyming Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Beautiful as thee...
Dr. Ricky...
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This is a Rhyming Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Beautiful as thee...
Dr. Ricky...
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Wow thanks for the great review! I do appreciate it!
Comment from WalkerMan
This beautiful and aptly illustrated Pantoum is yet another fine example of why you are the queen of "discreet heat" poetry. You well express the passion growing within the loving tenderness of this moonlit embrace. Yes, "Eternal love bears no disguise" and this "lush sultry night" is only one of many.... The Pantoum form is perfect for this lovely poem, all the rhymes work naturally, and the overall flow is silky smooth. The heat subtly veiled within your splendidly chosen words builds with each rereading. Superb.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This beautiful and aptly illustrated Pantoum is yet another fine example of why you are the queen of "discreet heat" poetry. You well express the passion growing within the loving tenderness of this moonlit embrace. Yes, "Eternal love bears no disguise" and this "lush sultry night" is only one of many.... The Pantoum form is perfect for this lovely poem, all the rhymes work naturally, and the overall flow is silky smooth. The heat subtly veiled within your splendidly chosen words builds with each rereading. Superb.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Hey mike, you so spoil me. Thanks for the wonderful review and kind words. I appreciate you . :-)
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You are most welcome, Susan. I like it, and wish you well in the contest, as this post is a solid contender. -- Mike
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...... you spoil me.
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:))
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poem writing prompt.
A good message in your verse and the picture is amazing.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poem writing prompt.
A good message in your verse and the picture is amazing.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Hi Sharon, thank you for yet another great review!!!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH wow, I'm in for something like this, sounds so divine and the rhyme flows effortlessly. cool breeze, soft touch, lush sultry night.
cool breeze, soft touch, lush sultry night.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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OH wow, I'm in for something like this, sounds so divine and the rhyme flows effortlessly. cool breeze, soft touch, lush sultry night.
cool breeze, soft touch, lush sultry night.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thanks Barb, for the sweet review. I do appreciate you taking the time to read and review! Have a wonderful day. :-)
Comment from jppoet
This is the first of your poems that I have read and WOW, though steamy hot, it is poetically artistic, replete with sweet rhymes and metrical finesse. Congratulations. It is a bit reminiscent of my poem Valentine's
Day, now entered in the Acrostic poem contest of VALENTINE POETRY,
awarded yesterday ALL TIME BEST by Fanstory. Please take a peek, let me
know what you think. Love and Blessings, john
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This is the first of your poems that I have read and WOW, though steamy hot, it is poetically artistic, replete with sweet rhymes and metrical finesse. Congratulations. It is a bit reminiscent of my poem Valentine's
Day, now entered in the Acrostic poem contest of VALENTINE POETRY,
awarded yesterday ALL TIME BEST by Fanstory. Please take a peek, let me
know what you think. Love and Blessings, john
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thank you john for this kind review. I do appreciate you taking the time to read and offer your thoughts. Yes, I always try an reciprocate reviews..time allowing. Congrats on your All Time Best..status.