Paternity test.
A joyful moment.15 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your taking on the persona of a proud poppa in this Lanturne poem. The single, final word is very compelling and the photograph reinforces the feeling perfectly. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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I enjoyed your taking on the persona of a proud poppa in this Lanturne poem. The single, final word is very compelling and the photograph reinforces the feeling perfectly. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Awe, the joy of fatherhood. It will drastically change the whole dynamic of your life. It sometimes turns an immature boy into a man. I like the message and artwork. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Awe, the joy of fatherhood. It will drastically change the whole dynamic of your life. It sometimes turns an immature boy into a man. I like the message and artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Many thanks.
Comment from misscookie
I love the p[hoot that you choose to go with your write
It captured my attention from the start
It made me think of these young man(boys) making babies.. Any one can be a daddy but it takes a man to be a father
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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I love the p[hoot that you choose to go with your write
It captured my attention from the start
It made me think of these young man(boys) making babies.. Any one can be a daddy but it takes a man to be a father
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Well said you are quite right. Many thanks for your comments
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You're very welcome and thank you for those kind words
Cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It's funny how such a test means so much and changes everything, joy for a father, we can always be assured of who our Mother is, but not always sure who our father is, a wonderful Lanturne Poem here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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It's funny how such a test means so much and changes everything, joy for a father, we can always be assured of who our Mother is, but not always sure who our father is, a wonderful Lanturne Poem here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Yes that crossed my mind, there is never any doubt about who the mother is, strange that lol.
Thanks and have anice weekend. Love Jen x.
Comment from Rasmine
If this is true, okay, I don't think so unless they made a mistake like they did on mine when I first came. They said I was male, even though the picture was a female.
Good poem, cute picture. :)
I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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If this is true, okay, I don't think so unless they made a mistake like they did on mine when I first came. They said I was male, even though the picture was a female.
Good poem, cute picture. :)
I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lanturne. Most fathers are excited when they discover they will become a father soon. The test is usually the first notice and many are pleasantly surprised.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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A very well-written Lanturne. Most fathers are excited when they discover they will become a father soon. The test is usually the first notice and many are pleasantly surprised.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Lanturne Contest Entree rich in Theme.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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This is a Lanturne Contest Entree rich in Theme.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt.
A good message in your short verse and the picture is amazing.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Lanturne Poetry writing prompt.
A good message in your short verse and the picture is amazing.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thanks Sharon.
Comment from Henry King
Ha! What comes first? The picture or the poem. Excellent pairing of two forms of communication. That's why it is called an art. Nothing more needs to be added, it's all there. A fine artist.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Ha! What comes first? The picture or the poem. Excellent pairing of two forms of communication. That's why it is called an art. Nothing more needs to be added, it's all there. A fine artist.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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The poem came first. Thanks for the comments.
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Your welcome
Comment from royowen
I don't think there's anything more wonderful than having and knowing children ore ours, except maybe for grandchildren, I know the joy of both, that is why this sich a great theme, and a great qualifier in this contes, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I don't think there's anything more wonderful than having and knowing children ore ours, except maybe for grandchildren, I know the joy of both, that is why this sich a great theme, and a great qualifier in this contes, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Thank you Roy, much appreciated.
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Most welcome