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Comment from Katie Solis
I liked your moral, but you were right, it wasn't clear until the last stanza. The beginning was very good, and I appreciate the story. It was also nice to have a girl piggy thrown into the mix. The tittle was a bit misleading, I was looking for the widows.
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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I liked your moral, but you were right, it wasn't clear until the last stanza. The beginning was very good, and I appreciate the story. It was also nice to have a girl piggy thrown into the mix. The tittle was a bit misleading, I was looking for the widows.
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Comment Written 13-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
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I appreciate your giving this a look.
Comment from schatzling
What a delightful rhyme of a twisted fairy tale.
Simply lovely to read and enjoyed it immensely.
It flowed quite well and really was wonderful.
I am honored my quick drawing of those three piggies was the one art you decided to accompany your writing. Thank you so much.
Thank you for sharing as well.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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What a delightful rhyme of a twisted fairy tale.
Simply lovely to read and enjoyed it immensely.
It flowed quite well and really was wonderful.
I am honored my quick drawing of those three piggies was the one art you decided to accompany your writing. Thank you so much.
Thank you for sharing as well.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2018
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Thank you. Thanks for use of the applicable drawing as well.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about the piglets and their houses to protect them from the elements and the wolf. Tge straw abd stick houses was easy to destroy. The third house was strong and build with bricks but the piglet wandered outside instead of enjoy her house's safety.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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A very well-written story about the piglets and their houses to protect them from the elements and the wolf. Tge straw abd stick houses was easy to destroy. The third house was strong and build with bricks but the piglet wandered outside instead of enjoy her house's safety.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from jppoet
oo la la, this is such a Fantabulous flash of fantasy, it is so piggy wiggy wonderful. It may not dance in dalliance of metrical array, but says it all and wants to say in rhymes of sweet display.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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oo la la, this is such a Fantabulous flash of fantasy, it is so piggy wiggy wonderful. It may not dance in dalliance of metrical array, but says it all and wants to say in rhymes of sweet display.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thanks, jp. It?s right-on of you to dutifully do a rhyming review.
Comment from Rasmine
Good poem! It made me laugh so I give a six. I need a laugh today. Some people are angry and vindictive. It's crazy.
I wish you all the luck in this fun contest. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Good poem! It made me laugh so I give a six. I need a laugh today. Some people are angry and vindictive. It's crazy.
I wish you all the luck in this fun contest. :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much, Rasmine., for the encouraging r3view.
Comment from smileycloud
LOL
I laughed all the way through
I love the theme the wittle spattering of delightful language is so endearing
I am rushed this morning
If OK?
I have bookmarked to read again and gain all the pleasure out of such a fine write
have a smiley day
Lorraine
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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LOL
I laughed all the way through
I love the theme the wittle spattering of delightful language is so endearing
I am rushed this morning
If OK?
I have bookmarked to read again and gain all the pleasure out of such a fine write
have a smiley day
Lorraine
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Lorraine, for the terrific review.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Very good. Well written with superb twists - although more good luck than good management in one and two LOL. The ending was very good, the biggest twist of all - 'The moral is likely not clear,
but a mistake is quite hard to hide;
when your house has the features
to hold back bad creatures --
it's useless if you're not inside..... Excellent. Good luck in the contest. Dorothy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Very good. Well written with superb twists - although more good luck than good management in one and two LOL. The ending was very good, the biggest twist of all - 'The moral is likely not clear,
but a mistake is quite hard to hide;
when your house has the features
to hold back bad creatures --
it's useless if you're not inside..... Excellent. Good luck in the contest. Dorothy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Dorothy, for the terrific review.
Comment from Ursula1
This is a fun poem to read. I love the characters names, very clever. It is a good take on the original Three Pigs. Great title and picture to go along with the poem also. Your rhyme scheme flows and your writing is good. Very imaginative!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This is a fun poem to read. I love the characters names, very clever. It is a good take on the original Three Pigs. Great title and picture to go along with the poem also. Your rhyme scheme flows and your writing is good. Very imaginative!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Ursula, for the great review.
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You are welcome! :)
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a fairy tale from The Twist contest entry Basin Three Little Pigs rich on seems Rosie Madrid Redwolf load well with no grammar issues so to speak this is the second one my first one was the three little bears also accidentally written thanks for this and good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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This is a fairy tale from The Twist contest entry Basin Three Little Pigs rich on seems Rosie Madrid Redwolf load well with no grammar issues so to speak this is the second one my first one was the three little bears also accidentally written thanks for this and good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thanks, Ricky
Comment from misscookie
Well you truly blew my mind
You captured my attention from the first line too the last
I couldn't stop laughing this is what the world needs something to make us laugh
Thank you for sharing the funny poem
Cookie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Well you truly blew my mind
You captured my attention from the first line too the last
I couldn't stop laughing this is what the world needs something to make us laugh
Thank you for sharing the funny poem
Cookie
Comment Written 28-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018
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Thank you, Cookie, for the great review.
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My pleasure.
Cookie