Comment from mkflood

Excellent

And the reader can recognize it..I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job and thanks again...mkflood

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018

Thank you for your rating and kind words. Both appreciated.

Comment from Xia Thornwood

Good

I really like this poem. A lot of love poems focus on falling in love, and not about love over time, after marriage. Quick question: "It's been a whole" year? Did you skip a word, or is there something I'm missing? Over all, I like the poem and its theme.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018

Thank you for your review and also for pointing out my weak spot. I meant it to take place many years after their marriage.

Comment from Angela Hayes

Good

Good read, interesting image to match, two people in love very modern day, easy to read, inspirational, educational, your poem has a personal touch of true emotion making it very special, well presented, thank you for sharing.
Good Luck!

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018

Thank you for your rating and your words of encouragement.

reply by Angela Hayes on 07-Jun-2018

:)

Comment from aanneee

Excellent

I am of a mind that expecting perfection right of the bat, possibly creates a relationship that falters far more than yours appears to have done. This is a lovely presentation and your words spot on as are your notes beneath. Thank you for the read - Dinah

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2018

Really appreciate your rating and words of encouragement. Thanks ever so much.