Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Now that's a fun word! I think that should also apply to TV shows, Youtube videos as well as plays. Fun poem and it got me wondering if you were referring to anyone here? Lol. No, don't tell me.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2018

Haha, nope. Entirely fictitious :)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very good. It sounds like some of us here on FanStory who write while in a rut. Your poem rhymes well and it educates the reader to a new word which is used in the last line very well. Marilyn

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thanks very much for the kind words, Marilyn - Cheers, Craig

Comment from strandregs

Excellent

Hi Craig
Good rhyming, nice story
The land of sardoodeldom, sounds like a place i alice's land.
the queen of hearts she ate four tarts
then off with heads
as she sardoodled noisy...
anyway good going. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

lol I haven't heard "The Queen of Hearts" in forever, and never that version.Thanks so much, Z - Craig

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

This word has a really nice ring to it, Sardoodledom. It sounds like one of those multi-purpose words, you know, his explanation sounded like sardoodledom or where shall we go for lunch? How about sardoodledom? We haven't been there in a while.

That said, terrific poem and pity about those trivial works for theatre, but I guess entertainment serves a purpose.

Much enjoyed, Craig.

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thanks very much, Gloria, and my sardoodledom thanks you as well. Cheers, Craig

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Craig. This is charming. But I think tweedledom is missing in action. Smile. I had no idea what it meant. I have not been to the theater in years. I had a friend who acted in the late seventies and early eighties. Nicely metered as always Craig. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

I had a spouse who acted for decades! harhar Thanks for the lovely review, Pam :) Craig

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Craig, this is a very cute poem you have penned about Sardoodledom. Until today I have not heard of that word. You used very good words and the appropriate art work to go with your words. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

Thanks for another lovely review, Teri. Much appreciated - Craig

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Craig,

Ah, yes. Characters who are contrived for a special purpose - but they do not have much other value. I think any story with a large cast of characters has at least one - they are only there for one purpose.

A great use of your new word - which I never would have suspected meant anything even remotely like this,

~patty~

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

If you'd asked me before I read the definition, I'd have had not a clue. Many thanks, Patty :) Craig

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Not a word I would ever use in everyday conversation, but certainly fun to say!! It even sounds like something Mary Poppins would have come up with! :) :) As always, I am enjoying these -- thank you for the smile today, sir! :) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2018

It does sound quite Poppinsesque. Many thanks for he lovely review, Yvette, have a great weekend! Craig

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

I truly love this one and have just the person I know that I want to spring this one on, he will love it. Nicely done in explaining the new word for us to learn.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks for the very kind words, Barb. I hope he's not a playwright - or at least if he is, he's a good one :) Most grateful, Craig

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the art and practice of your friend who writes charming plays having good plots and characters hail from old Sardoodledom; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2018

Thanks for reviewing - Craig