Winter Evening by a Lake
a romantic quatern8 total reviews
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great rhymes and vision of two lovers
by the lake. I could see them laugh and
tumble in the snow. Great entry and photo.
It's nice to have fun. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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Great rhymes and vision of two lovers
by the lake. I could see them laugh and
tumble in the snow. Great entry and photo.
It's nice to have fun. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2018
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I am delighted you could share these lovers? joy vicariously. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written quatern poem, which always for me leads to a romantic poem. I enjoyed your little romantic endavour there at a lake on a winter's night with a loved one in your arms.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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A very well-written quatern poem, which always for me leads to a romantic poem. I enjoyed your little romantic endavour there at a lake on a winter's night with a loved one in your arms.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my winter tryst by the lake, Sandra. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about two lovers' romantic moods and moments on a winter evening by the lake, tells about their basking in bright moon and cuddling on a fallen log, fearlessly kissing, enjoying the moments; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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This speaks about two lovers' romantic moods and moments on a winter evening by the lake, tells about their basking in bright moon and cuddling on a fallen log, fearlessly kissing, enjoying the moments; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my romantic Quatern, and appreciate your kind praise.
Comment from mally mack
Hello There
This is a well penned entry into this contest. Your repeating line use was great because it wasn't in the same place in every stanza. The rhyme scheme to accompany it flowed wonderfully. I love the way you were able to bring the feeling of the cold into the illustration and background. That is a lovely touch.
Best Wishes
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Hello There
This is a well penned entry into this contest. Your repeating line use was great because it wasn't in the same place in every stanza. The rhyme scheme to accompany it flowed wonderfully. I love the way you were able to bring the feeling of the cold into the illustration and background. That is a lovely touch.
Best Wishes
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my romantic Quatern, mally mack, and appreciate your kind praise.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written repetition poem you have penned for the prompt. You used very good and romantic words with very lovely art work to go with your words. It made me think of winter and the lovely snow. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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This is a very beautiful and well written repetition poem you have penned for the prompt. You used very good and romantic words with very lovely art work to go with your words. It made me think of winter and the lovely snow. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed my romantic Quatern, Teri. Thank you so much for your very kind praise.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
When I was a teen in Ohio, one of the best places to meet girls was at the park on an ice-covered pond. You didn't need to be the best skater there. Just don't be the one who falls most. Good luck.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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When I was a teen in Ohio, one of the best places to meet girls was at the park on an ice-covered pond. You didn't need to be the best skater there. Just don't be the one who falls most. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Sounds like fun, Thomas. I never learned to ice skate. Thank you for sharing my poem.
Comment from meeshu
a very romantic and mischievous little write. young lovers at play is a very great to reminisce about past experiences we hold dear..
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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a very romantic and mischievous little write. young lovers at play is a very great to reminisce about past experiences we hold dear..
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Many thanks for sharing my poem and your kind words.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a lovely cascade poem featuring the tell-tale cascading line that goes from line one, in the first stanza, to line two, in the second, line 3 in the third, and finally, the very last line--creating sort of a "bookend" type effect.
Wonderful wintry imagery in this stunning contest entry.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean 8)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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This is a lovely cascade poem featuring the tell-tale cascading line that goes from line one, in the first stanza, to line two, in the second, line 3 in the third, and finally, the very last line--creating sort of a "bookend" type effect.
Wonderful wintry imagery in this stunning contest entry.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean 8)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2018
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Thank you, Dean, for sharing my cascade poem and your kind praise.
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My pleasure.
