Journey
1-7-1 poem10 total reviews
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hey, this is thought-provoking, and I loved the way you have captured the cyclic, invisible, yet powerful nature of the wind. Even though it is there, it's only seen through its effects, not in its essence, so to speak. This is precious, I enjoyed thinking about it, and I'm so happy to give it a sixer, cheers, and hope life's smiling on you today, love, Ana. :)
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Hey, this is thought-provoking, and I loved the way you have captured the cyclic, invisible, yet powerful nature of the wind. Even though it is there, it's only seen through its effects, not in its essence, so to speak. This is precious, I enjoyed thinking about it, and I'm so happy to give it a sixer, cheers, and hope life's smiling on you today, love, Ana. :)
Comment Written 26-Aug-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
Good topic and syllable count for this well written, nicely presented 1-7-1 contest entry.
The unyielding, never-ending cycle of life. Where would we be without it?
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Good topic and syllable count for this well written, nicely presented 1-7-1 contest entry.
The unyielding, never-ending cycle of life. Where would we be without it?
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon
Well done with this piece - it must be very difficult to write in this format and to create meaning too.
A clever piece of writing: I wish you well in your contest: it is a tough one!
cheers
phill
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Hello Anon
Well done with this piece - it must be very difficult to write in this format and to create meaning too.
A clever piece of writing: I wish you well in your contest: it is a tough one!
cheers
phill
Comment Written 25-Aug-2018
Comment from zlp22
Interesting way of writing a poem. Picture and the words really stand out. Good luck in the contest. Flow of words makes it an easy read. Since it is four lines I hope that it will still count.
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Interesting way of writing a poem. Picture and the words really stand out. Good luck in the contest. Flow of words makes it an easy read. Since it is four lines I hope that it will still count.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
Comment from rspoet
You've done well for this limited contest of 1-7-1 syllables
and your repeated word "wind" has a nice effect
in the poem.
Excellent photograph to match the words
Well done
Good luck in the voting
RS
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You've done well for this limited contest of 1-7-1 syllables
and your repeated word "wind" has a nice effect
in the poem.
Excellent photograph to match the words
Well done
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
Comment from donette1914
a very cute little story of an acorn
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
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a very cute little story of an acorn
it was an honor to read your talented work
thank you for sharing
this is well penned
I hope for the best in the contest
I like the artwork
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Tis a lovely 1-7-1 and I must admit to really finding something of worth in this form.
Wind and the acorn set a pensive tone.
Just one point is that the last word must repeat the first word.
Excellent post and I wish you luck in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Tis a lovely 1-7-1 and I must admit to really finding something of worth in this form.
Wind and the acorn set a pensive tone.
Just one point is that the last word must repeat the first word.
Excellent post and I wish you luck in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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Thanks so much. Yep, I missed that totally. DUH! I changed it. HA! One line of rules and I still can't read them. :))
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A beautiful nature write of a seed destined for life, the tenacity for livingnever fails to rise to the challenges, best of luck with the contest, love these words, love Dolly x
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A beautiful nature write of a seed destined for life, the tenacity for livingnever fails to rise to the challenges, best of luck with the contest, love these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a great 1-7-1; but I would mention that the prompt states that line three must be the same word as line one. Just sayin. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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This is a great 1-7-1; but I would mention that the prompt states that line three must be the same word as line one. Just sayin. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2018
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OH? Hey, thanks! I missed that totally. I'll fix that. Good lookin' out. I never would've known. :))
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting interpretation of the acorn/tree narrative -- your displaced wording does a good job of portraying the oddity yet the connection in your words. :) :) I would point out, however, that the first and the last lines are supposed to be exactly the same....
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
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An interesting interpretation of the acorn/tree narrative -- your displaced wording does a good job of portraying the oddity yet the connection in your words. :) :) I would point out, however, that the first and the last lines are supposed to be exactly the same....
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2018