Comment from poesyapprentice

Excellent

This is a tough competition, indeed. I completely got your write, though, and feel that way sometimes too, lol. With line six wrapping around to line seven to complete the phrase or thought it was disruptive to the flow of the write, but all the requirements were still met for your entry. Thank you for promoting your work!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2018

Thanks, PA

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written rhyming alliteration. If we don't take changes we will never know if we could win or get somewhere we would like to be. Each day is a challenge and a learning experience.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thanks, Sandra.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have a fun theme... the contest. Excellent form and execution of this for type of poetry. This is new to me and I think you met the challenge beautifully. The 7x7 has a flowing quality that keeps us engaged. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thanks, Sugarray

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for your lighthearted response to the prompt. I enjoyed your use of alliteration, regular lines and rhymes. I appreciated your reinforcing picture selection as well. Despite your prediction, best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018

Thanks, Joan

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

everyone else is not alliteration since it's repetition of the consonant sound, I believe.
Aside from that, you expressed my feelings about contests as well. Good luck. I'll now check out others. LOL/

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Actually, alliteration covers consonance and assonance initial sounds. There is also unvoiced alliteration where the letters match but not their sound. pteradactyl (with T or P) and
gnome (N and G) are examples.

reply by Spitfire on 18-Sep-2018

Good to know. Thanks.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hey, you never know unless you try, Anonymous Poet.
It is always hard to gauge what will appeal to readers and potential voters here and what will not. It never seems to work out like you've planned.
Best of luck to you with this fine entry.
~Dean

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thank you, Dean

reply by Dean Kuch on 18-Sep-2018

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

This is exactly how I felt this morning when I saw this contest come up, you remarkably pinned my thoughts, and therefore I'm going to vote for you...
Thank you for doing my work today LOL ð???
Judy

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thanks, Nanny, for the great support.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nice, great job on this alteration winning is hard to do on here with so many out standing writers on here. I've lucked out on a couple contests in the past. Nicely done on the rhyming and meter is good. best of luck, have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thanks, William

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

this is a fascinating style of poetry, your write makes me wish I had time to enter this contest. i'll definitely try one later. good luck to you..

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Thanks. Hope you enter.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a good entry in the contest, Mystery Author, Your lines flow well and rhyme as required. However, the alliterisen is missing in line 1. I don't believe rapidly/writing will pass the judges. Maybe they sound alike but are written differently. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2018

Alliteration is sound over lettering, Jan. If the judges disagree, they're incorrect.

Example: Jose joined the hunt. According to the ressoning you are employing, Jose is alliterative with joint, but not hunt. That doesn't seem right.