Refreshing Retreat
Rhyming Alliterisen Entry4 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Just lovely! Excellent form and execution of this for type of poetry. This is new to me and I think you met the challenge beautifully. It has a flowing quality that keeps us engaged. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Just lovely! Excellent form and execution of this for type of poetry. This is new to me and I think you met the challenge beautifully. It has a flowing quality that keeps us engaged. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and share your sentiments.
Comment from melyuki
Hi there. Thank you for sharing such a splendid verse with most beautiful selection of alliterated words to describe a peaceful place of glorious grace. Lovely thoughts with refreshing emotions emanating from within. Special thanks for selecting my artwork to accompany your delightful poem. How humbling and what an honour. This painting was a touch of paradise in my mind's eye. Your verse is perfect. Sorry I can't offer you 6 stars. The site won't allow me to do so . All the best in the contest . Happy smiles from mel
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Hi there. Thank you for sharing such a splendid verse with most beautiful selection of alliterated words to describe a peaceful place of glorious grace. Lovely thoughts with refreshing emotions emanating from within. Special thanks for selecting my artwork to accompany your delightful poem. How humbling and what an honour. This painting was a touch of paradise in my mind's eye. Your verse is perfect. Sorry I can't offer you 6 stars. The site won't allow me to do so . All the best in the contest . Happy smiles from mel
Comment Written 19-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you for sharing your artwork and your sentiments regarding this poem. Your work is inspiring and I'm glad I was able to match the words with the emotions your painting evoked.
Comment from janalma
Good job on this. You seem to have followed all the rules correctly and made a lovely, yearning poem besides. We all wish that we could get away from all the BS sometimes. "trivial, trifling strife." How true.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Good job on this. You seem to have followed all the rules correctly and made a lovely, yearning poem besides. We all wish that we could get away from all the BS sometimes. "trivial, trifling strife." How true.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and share your sentiments. And especially for the generous star rating!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi whoever you are. This is very impressive. It is worthy of six stars but I have foolishly used all of mine already. The alliteration you chose was so smooth and natural that until I read your notes I did not even notice. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Hi whoever you are. This is very impressive. It is worthy of six stars but I have foolishly used all of mine already. The alliteration you chose was so smooth and natural that until I read your notes I did not even notice. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2018
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and share your sentiments. And for thinking it worthy of six stars!