A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
Viewing comments for Chapter 284 "Hen pecked"A collection of poems showcasing unusual words
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Of course you'd have to say she's right when faced with a scolding, quarrelsome woman. Great picture, and author's notes too, both brought a Sunday afternoon smile.
cheers, Craig,
valda
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Of course you'd have to say she's right when faced with a scolding, quarrelsome woman. Great picture, and author's notes too, both brought a Sunday afternoon smile.
cheers, Craig,
valda
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks very much Valda, much appreciated :) Craig
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL-- glad to know you know it. I'm grinning too big -- my face hurts.
If men were meant to rule the earth
there'd be no merriment and mirth.
The mess would be just like their rooms --
warnings posted 'bout the fumes...
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
LOL-- glad to know you know it. I'm grinning too big -- my face hurts.
If men were meant to rule the earth
there'd be no merriment and mirth.
The mess would be just like their rooms --
warnings posted 'bout the fumes...
Comment Written 11-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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If, in a forest, desolate and bleak,
a man should exercise his right to speak,
without a female there to tag along,
would that poor man be equally as wrong?
Thank you so much, Dawn ;-)
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Craig, wrong is wrong if heard or not,
and so say "Sorry", 'cuz you ought
by now to know the truth of this!
She married you, poor sorry Miss!
She KNEW what she would face with you-
a MAN? Bad habits, ego too!
That sports bag and your stinky socks,
a so-called pal who rarely talks
unless it's asking for a beer-
"You're by the fridge. Please bring one here."
And only 'please' because she gripes
so you learn manners. Oh, you 'types'...
(*snicker* You won't win, you know...HAHAHAHA)
Comment from BeasPeas
I'm LOL on this one. I wonder how tolerant the hubby would be if his wife was running around with half naked men. Good for Xanthippe who is back in the kitchen (or maybe the bathroom) refilling the jug. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
I'm LOL on this one. I wonder how tolerant the hubby would be if his wife was running around with half naked men. Good for Xanthippe who is back in the kitchen (or maybe the bathroom) refilling the jug. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2018
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Haha, thanks so much, Marilyn. I'm not sure how those ancient Greeks and Romans would have gone with the permissive morals of these days ;-) Cheers, Craig
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Haha ... don't you just hate it when someone is always right?!
This is a fun entry for the contest, Craig. I laughed at your author's notes too. I love your title, and your choice of artwork is priceless.
Cheers,
Connie
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
Haha ... don't you just hate it when someone is always right?!
This is a fun entry for the contest, Craig. I laughed at your author's notes too. I love your title, and your choice of artwork is priceless.
Cheers,
Connie
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
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Glad you got a laugh out of it Connie, not everyone found it amusing! Cheers :) Craig
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Craig,
Great use of the two-four-two poetic form to introduce us to your new word. I think I would hate it if this were the way my hubby was to describe or even think of me!
So, you think it was his xanthippe who was responsible for him accepting his death so easy?
Hmmm,
~MP~
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
Hi, Craig,
Great use of the two-four-two poetic form to introduce us to your new word. I think I would hate it if this were the way my hubby was to describe or even think of me!
So, you think it was his xanthippe who was responsible for him accepting his death so easy?
Hmmm,
~MP~
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
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Thanks Patty.
Must be a cultural thing; my other half and I are putting **** on each other all the time, and we're not exactly unusual in that regard :)
Much appreciated, Craig.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-wruitten 2-4-2 poem about the scolding woman that never stops and always thinks she is right even though she is many times to be proven wrong.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
A very well-wruitten 2-4-2 poem about the scolding woman that never stops and always thinks she is right even though she is many times to be proven wrong.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
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Thanks very much, Sandra. The kind comments are much appreciated, Craig
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a perfect use of the 2-4-2 poetic form. It's so concise that it is clever. You say tons in these 8 syllables. In my mind, this is how you do the 2-4-2 poem. And, I know who Xanthippe is now. I don't know what is being poured on Socrates's head, but that is another issue.
Great job.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
What a perfect use of the 2-4-2 poetic form. It's so concise that it is clever. You say tons in these 8 syllables. In my mind, this is how you do the 2-4-2 poem. And, I know who Xanthippe is now. I don't know what is being poured on Socrates's head, but that is another issue.
Great job.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
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It doesn't look good, does it? Thanks for the kind comments, Debbie. Much to my surprise, a number of people seem to have been quite put out by this one. Apart from writing a poem which said "a hen-pecking woman is a myth", I don't know where this could have gone. We're all so serious!
Comment from lyenochka
What a picture! Am I to understand that was Socrates? Well, I would guess that there might be other reasons why his wife was such a Xanthippe. I'm guessing he wasn't home much in his professional philospher status. Lol.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
What a picture! Am I to understand that was Socrates? Well, I would guess that there might be other reasons why his wife was such a Xanthippe. I'm guessing he wasn't home much in his professional philospher status. Lol.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2018
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LOL thanks for having a laugh. Some people seemed to get a bit put out. He probably was the type not to stop and ask directions when he was driving ;-) Cheers, Helen
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Love it when these short ones can make you smile - love that you, once again, were able to work this contest write into your collection! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
LOL! Love it when these short ones can make you smile - love that you, once again, were able to work this contest write into your collection! ;) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks for the great comments and the good wishes, Yvette. I guess I need to hope there's a man or two on the judging panel ;-) Most grateful, Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
'Or else!' Comes t mind as she was known to be bad tempered! A clever write and a word we don't see very often, always learning with your writes, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
'Or else!' Comes t mind as she was known to be bad tempered! A clever write and a word we don't see very often, always learning with your writes, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much, Dolly. Most grateful for the lovely comments. Craig