A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
Viewing comments for Chapter 287 "The bequest"A collection of poems showcasing unusual words
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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Craig,
LOL! I wonder who he gave his 'first best bed' to. This is a lovely way to use the word, parthian. Your final wishes are certainly your parting shot. Thank you for sharing this and giving me my morning chuckle.
~MP~
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
Hi, Craig,
LOL! I wonder who he gave his 'first best bed' to. This is a lovely way to use the word, parthian. Your final wishes are certainly your parting shot. Thank you for sharing this and giving me my morning chuckle.
~MP~
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much for the lovely comments, Patty. Glad it tickled your funny bone. Craig
Comment from catch22
Wow Craig, what a posthumous bird to a spouse! I liked how you mixed the word of the day with some literary history as well. Good use of a short form as well
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Wow Craig, what a posthumous bird to a spouse! I liked how you mixed the word of the day with some literary history as well. Good use of a short form as well
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much, Pam. Yep, I'd say they definitely weren't on the greatest of terms, judging by that :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
You use such interesting facts (or suggestions) in your poems, Craig. These details make them so enjoyable. I will probably forget Parthian, but not "second best bed."
This was a fun post.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
You use such interesting facts (or suggestions) in your poems, Craig. These details make them so enjoyable. I will probably forget Parthian, but not "second best bed."
This was a fun post.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks once again, Debbie. It's funny. In my house, we have decided since we almost never have visitors (the outlaws being too old and frail to travel now), we have no real need for a permanent spare bedroom. So, I have been trying to decide for weeks now which is our "second best bed", to make room for a study. I am hopeless at the most trivial decisions!
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With Mom living with us now, my daughter here for a year, my sister-in-law staying frequently, my son and fiancé visiting occasionally from New York, we need third and fourth beds at least. Or, hotel rooms.
Comment from Robbie Yates
A great 5-7-5, and one which has a very interesting back-story. I didn't know about William Shakespeare's slightly spiteful side - but what a powerful parthian shot indeed!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
A great 5-7-5, and one which has a very interesting back-story. I didn't know about William Shakespeare's slightly spiteful side - but what a powerful parthian shot indeed!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much, Robbie. Much appreciated, as always. Craig
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaaaaa, now this is just hilarious, not even the Captain's bed, or the cat's bed, the second best?
Well wherever there's a will there's a bunch of lousy relatives.
Great job, Craig. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Haaaaaaaaa, now this is just hilarious, not even the Captain's bed, or the cat's bed, the second best?
Well wherever there's a will there's a bunch of lousy relatives.
Great job, Craig. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks very much Gloria, most grateful :)
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, that's so sad. I guess that relationship was that bad. I like how you used "Parthian shot" as naturally as one would saying, "parting shot," which doesn't sound quite as eloquent.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Oh, that's so sad. I guess that relationship was that bad. I like how you used "Parthian shot" as naturally as one would saying, "parting shot," which doesn't sound quite as eloquent.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks Helen. It does seem that they weren't on the best of terms. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Thanks for the notes, Craig. I did not know about the will. Good job on your 575--correct syllable per line, good topic, great picture, reads smoothly. I enjoyed reading it. Jan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Thanks for the notes, Craig. I did not know about the will. Good job on your 575--correct syllable per line, good topic, great picture, reads smoothly. I enjoyed reading it. Jan
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks very much for the kind words, Jan. They're appreciated, as always. Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
Interesting. I guess his passions found a home elsewhere. Their relationship ended badly and maybe for good reason. I think lots of couples end their relationship with a parting shot. Excellent job with your poem and the author's note. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Interesting. I guess his passions found a home elsewhere. Their relationship ended badly and maybe for good reason. I think lots of couples end their relationship with a parting shot. Excellent job with your poem and the author's note. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Some have suggested otherwise, but the consensus seems to be that he was making his displeasure known. Many thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah -- that definitely indicates that she was not even close to being in good graces...I mean, let's be honest here, it was rumored he was not sleeping with her in the marital way when he was alive, and here we have him making sure she STILL did not warm the sheets of his bed even after he was cold and dead!! :) I believe the reaction to that kind of a 'parthian' would be: "daaaayum!" :) :)
Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
Yeah -- that definitely indicates that she was not even close to being in good graces...I mean, let's be honest here, it was rumored he was not sleeping with her in the marital way when he was alive, and here we have him making sure she STILL did not warm the sheets of his bed even after he was cold and dead!! :) I believe the reaction to that kind of a 'parthian' would be: "daaaayum!" :) :)
Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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LOL I can just picture Anne letting rip in a long, southern drawl. Either that or, "We are not amused!" :) Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. An interesting fact about William Shakespears's personal life. He disinherited his own wife and divide his assets between their two daughters.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. An interesting fact about William Shakespears's personal life. He disinherited his own wife and divide his assets between their two daughters.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thanks very much, Sandra. Can't help but wonder why they didn't get along.