A Potpourri of Poetic Curiosities
Viewing comments for Chapter 311 "My Hat"A collection of poems showcasing unusual words
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Comment from Bill Schott
This limerick, My Hat, has the basic format and asks for a little respect for the man's topper. I think the beat would be well served by eliminating the word bald. That extra syllable tips the lid a bit to the left.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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This limerick, My Hat, has the basic format and asks for a little respect for the man's topper. I think the beat would be well served by eliminating the word bald. That extra syllable tips the lid a bit to the left.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Hi Bill, The syllable count is 8-8-5-5-8, meter anapestic. Thanks for the suggestion, and for your continued support in reading these little ditties. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Gloria ....
I wonder what four-and-nine stands for? Cheap hats are the best though and you don't have to worry about hat hair which always looks incredibly awkward.
A fine limerick friend, Craig. You must have Dollarama over there, yes?
Enjoyed.
gloria
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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I wonder what four-and-nine stands for? Cheap hats are the best though and you don't have to worry about hat hair which always looks incredibly awkward.
A fine limerick friend, Craig. You must have Dollarama over there, yes?
Enjoyed.
gloria
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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We have the $2 Shop, which I'm guessing is the same concept? Although it's long ago, if ever, that everything in there was $2 or less. My favourite hat was picked up at a Salvation Army Op Shop. Many thanks, Gloria :)
Comment from lyenochka
What a fun phrase, 'four-and-nine!' We have a phrase for cheap stores 'five and dime' store so a 'four-and-nine' must be a penny cheaper. These days, we have the Dollar Store which probably won't last due to our current relationship with just about all the cheap-manufacturing countries.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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What a fun phrase, 'four-and-nine!' We have a phrase for cheap stores 'five and dime' store so a 'four-and-nine' must be a penny cheaper. These days, we have the Dollar Store which probably won't last due to our current relationship with just about all the cheap-manufacturing countries.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Yes, well, your esteemed leader certainly isn't helping in that regard, Helen. Many thanks :) Craig
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Yes, sigh. I was referring to that.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Craig, as I've said so many times before while following you on this journey through your much loved book is that I'm learning all the time. And now I'm learning again. I liked your poem. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Hi Craig, as I've said so many times before while following you on this journey through your much loved book is that I'm learning all the time. And now I'm learning again. I liked your poem. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Thanks very much, Ulla. I'm most grateful for your continued support :) Craig
Comment from BeasPeas
Great write. I enjoyed reading your limerick. My son shaves his head but has grown a big, bushy beard instead. Not my cup of tea, but it's his face. Four and nine... a good term for cheap goods. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Great write. I enjoyed reading your limerick. My son shaves his head but has grown a big, bushy beard instead. Not my cup of tea, but it's his face. Four and nine... a good term for cheap goods. Marilyn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Well, I think your son shows excellent judgement, Marilyn. Thanks for enjoying my poem. Craig
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I have to be on my "toes" with my kids. They are a heck of a lot smarter than old mom.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Limerick about the needed hat in the hot summer sun. It is a better idea to put on a hat than to get your brains fried and your head skin burn red from the son.
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A very well-written Limerick about the needed hat in the hot summer sun. It is a better idea to put on a hat than to get your brains fried and your head skin burn red from the son.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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It most certainly is, Sandra. My skin wasn't made for this climate. Thanks, ancestors. Cheers, Craig
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Hi Craig,
This is a cute Limerick that conveys the meaning of 'four-and-nine' well to your reader, Craig. "My much-loved lid" .... my fave part. Thanks for teaching me another new word. I wish I could get my better half to put on a 'four-and-nine' when he bakes in the sun.
Cheers,
Connie
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Hi Craig,
This is a cute Limerick that conveys the meaning of 'four-and-nine' well to your reader, Craig. "My much-loved lid" .... my fave part. Thanks for teaching me another new word. I wish I could get my better half to put on a 'four-and-nine' when he bakes in the sun.
Cheers,
Connie
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Send him down to the melanoma capital of the world for a little while, Connie. He might get the idea :) Many thanks, Craig
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I'll keep it in mind, Craig. :)
Comment from --Turtle.
Hey, Craig,
reading on the run, but I wanted to say, I read this poem and enjoyed and only had one suggestion for consideration...
My hat, I must say, is just fine;
(My hat, I must say, fits? just fine;
instead of is?
Other than that quick thought, the limerick has a playful appreciation for apparel that might not be fancy or expensive, but sits atop the head and gets the job done to satisfaction, plus affinity.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Hey, Craig,
reading on the run, but I wanted to say, I read this poem and enjoyed and only had one suggestion for consideration...
My hat, I must say, is just fine;
(My hat, I must say, fits? just fine;
instead of is?
Other than that quick thought, the limerick has a playful appreciation for apparel that might not be fancy or expensive, but sits atop the head and gets the job done to satisfaction, plus affinity.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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OK, I agree, "fits" it is! Many thanks, Turtle. Great to hear from you :) Cheers, Craig
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Craig,
A very nice poem and lovely picture to describe a hat that some would consider 'cheap.' It is hard to know the difference between a good hat and one that is inferior, so I just pick the ones I like - whereas I always buy good ones for the hubby. His balding hat needs a good cover,
Thank you for sharing your new word with us,
~MP~
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Hi, Craig,
A very nice poem and lovely picture to describe a hat that some would consider 'cheap.' It is hard to know the difference between a good hat and one that is inferior, so I just pick the ones I like - whereas I always buy good ones for the hubby. His balding hat needs a good cover,
Thank you for sharing your new word with us,
~MP~
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Thanks very much, once again. I have a couple of hats, but my "fun" one is a cheapie :) Cheers, Craig.
Comment from Kdee1
I really enjoyed this. You have a great way of writing that makes a person smile and want more. You're really good with words. Really good and amazing.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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I really enjoyed this. You have a great way of writing that makes a person smile and want more. You're really good with words. Really good and amazing.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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"Really good, amazing...", so I hope you don't mind if I ask if you really mean to grade it 4 stars? I only ask because 4 stars is meant to be for work that requires corrections. If you did, fair enough, but sometimes people accidentally pick the wrong option from the drop down. Your comments make me think you judged it better than that.