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Comment from tempeste
Ciao Bill Schott!
Breakfast is my favourite meal ..the smell of toast and scrambled eggs with a strong aroma of coffee that creeps out from the kitchen is already for me a treat in itself ..sitting down and devouring it is the ultimate joy.
I love my toast buttered when it is warm.
When I was in boarding school we used to get the toast served cold and stiff and adding the butter then was disgusting because it didn't melt.ð???
I don't see how so many people deprive themself of this joy and go to work without breakfast
No wonder they are grumpy.
Sometimes if I don't feel like cooking dinner ,I'm satisfied with a toast and an egg.
I have a variant of the traditional toast ..I bake the slice of bread in the a pan with a little bit of butter..I let it go brown and slightly crispy and then I filp it over .. The gas should always be on low.
Nice idea to write a poem about breakfast .
Often it is the simple things in life that put a smile on our face and make us feel good .
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Ciao Bill Schott!
Breakfast is my favourite meal ..the smell of toast and scrambled eggs with a strong aroma of coffee that creeps out from the kitchen is already for me a treat in itself ..sitting down and devouring it is the ultimate joy.
I love my toast buttered when it is warm.
When I was in boarding school we used to get the toast served cold and stiff and adding the butter then was disgusting because it didn't melt.ð???
I don't see how so many people deprive themself of this joy and go to work without breakfast
No wonder they are grumpy.
Sometimes if I don't feel like cooking dinner ,I'm satisfied with a toast and an egg.
I have a variant of the traditional toast ..I bake the slice of bread in the a pan with a little bit of butter..I let it go brown and slightly crispy and then I filp it over .. The gas should always be on low.
Nice idea to write a poem about breakfast .
Often it is the simple things in life that put a smile on our face and make us feel good .
Comment Written 20-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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It?s the most important meal of the day.
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, Bill I think your wife got the of you. Bribe you to go shopping and if you needed more food you could have at the diner. Great little poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Hahahaha, Bill I think your wife got the of you. Bribe you to go shopping and if you needed more food you could have at the diner. Great little poem. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Ulla. She knows my buttons.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, well I think I'm with her! Is there no filling you up Bill? Your write is fun and very very tasty! I enjoyed your story Bill, have a great day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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He he he, well I think I'm with her! Is there no filling you up Bill? Your write is fun and very very tasty! I enjoyed your story Bill, have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Bill. Did you run out of animals? How about koalas? Many women have their ways. I don't do that, but I was always the breadwinner. Still am. My husband does not like shopping that much. I enjoyed this. I am one of the few women who does not enjoy shopping. Maybe because I saved for retirement and gave to charities already. I would not be spending a man's money. I am glad I see this side of your poetry. Those eggs look good. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Hi Bill. Did you run out of animals? How about koalas? Many women have their ways. I don't do that, but I was always the breadwinner. Still am. My husband does not like shopping that much. I enjoyed this. I am one of the few women who does not enjoy shopping. Maybe because I saved for retirement and gave to charities already. I would not be spending a man's money. I am glad I see this side of your poetry. Those eggs look good. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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I?m giving the animals a pass for a while. Thanks for asking though.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, you still got a great breakfast out of it. I like that your toast was "closer to pastry!" I hope that the shopping didn't put you too far behind and way ahead for Christmas!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Lol. Well, you still got a great breakfast out of it. I like that your toast was "closer to pastry!" I hope that the shopping didn't put you too far behind and way ahead for Christmas!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Lyenochka
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, so that was her ulterior motive, huh? Good job, Bill, with your fun poem. I like the rhyme and smooth flow of lines. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Haha, so that was her ulterior motive, huh? Good job, Bill, with your fun poem. I like the rhyme and smooth flow of lines. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Earl Corp
LOL, you fell for it. When ever they do something special theres always a catch. The poem made sense and was entertaining. I haven't had dinner yet, that picture is making my stomach rumble.nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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LOL, you fell for it. When ever they do something special theres always a catch. The poem made sense and was entertaining. I haven't had dinner yet, that picture is making my stomach rumble.nice job.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Earl
Comment from Cass Carlton
Ten points to Mrs. Schott. A girl I can relate to. Feed the man up and then Wham! Put the question !! Now Bill, did you enjoy the breakfast she prepared for you? If the answer is "Yes", then surely a small shopping trip isn't too much to ask!!! Just think of what you'll be served up at your evening meal!! the poem is delightfully succinct, and I like the images that it brings to mind. There you were, tucking in to a delicious plate of eggs and ham with toast all buttery and crisp and golden. There would have been coffee afterwards and while you were blissfully sipping, down came the axe!!
Bu**er!! And Bu**er again. Ah well, Bill,it's all part of the joys of the matrimonial state. Cheers Cass
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Ten points to Mrs. Schott. A girl I can relate to. Feed the man up and then Wham! Put the question !! Now Bill, did you enjoy the breakfast she prepared for you? If the answer is "Yes", then surely a small shopping trip isn't too much to ask!!! Just think of what you'll be served up at your evening meal!! the poem is delightfully succinct, and I like the images that it brings to mind. There you were, tucking in to a delicious plate of eggs and ham with toast all buttery and crisp and golden. There would have been coffee afterwards and while you were blissfully sipping, down came the axe!!
Bu**er!! And Bu**er again. Ah well, Bill,it's all part of the joys of the matrimonial state. Cheers Cass
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Cass
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I like your wife, Bill! LOL What a delightful, funny poem.
I did laugh at the toast being more like pastry, that was excellent.
Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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I like your wife, Bill! LOL What a delightful, funny poem.
I did laugh at the toast being more like pastry, that was excellent.
Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from damommy
Now you know why you got the great breakfast. Did you take her to the stores? Great fun with this jaunty and cheery poem. Perfect picture choice.
Don't you just hate this thing that makes you have to keeping saying something to fill up the 150 characters!!!!!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Now you know why you got the great breakfast. Did you take her to the stores? Great fun with this jaunty and cheery poem. Perfect picture choice.
Don't you just hate this thing that makes you have to keeping saying something to fill up the 150 characters!!!!!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Thanks, da